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Kaise Khafa Ho Jaaun Tumse? (A hindi poetry)

User Profile: Pudding1000
Pudding1000 August 19th

Kaise khafa ho jaaun tumse,
jab tumhari namaujoodgi ki gawaahi di hai maine
apne hi dil ko tod ke?

Meri ranjishon ka haq tha tujhpe.
Tune uss ghar mein jhaank ke dekha,
jahaan kabhi koi na raha.

Tere husn ne meri rooh pe aisi rehmat kya jamaayi,
ki mere chhote se jahaan ko guroor de aayi.

Toh kaise kar liya tune yeh faisla
itne posheeda andaaz mein,
jab teri hi ijaazat se
maine apna har dhaaga khola?

Har dhalti dhoop mein
teri hi roshni talaashi.

Toh ab andhera kaise daraaye mujhe,
jab teri garmaahat ne mujhe
itna mehfooz kar diya..

Thx for reading <3

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User Profile: caringShoulder1357
caringShoulder1357 August 19th

@Pudding1000

I was not able to get the entire poem translated, but what I could  translate showed depth and feeling. Thank you for sharing.

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User Profile: Pudding1000
Pudding1000 OP August 19th

@caringShoulder1357

well... this may not be the best translation but here it is-

How could I ever be angry with you,
when I have borne witness to your absence
by breaking my own heart?

Even my grievances had a claim upon you.
You peered into that home
where no one had ever been before.

What grace did your beauty leave upon my soul,
that it filled my little world
with a pride I had never known?

So how did you come to make this decision
in such a hidden manner,
when, with your permission,
I had unravelled every thread of myself before you?

In every fading sunlight,
I searched only for your light.

So how could darkness frighten me now,
when your warmth had made me
feel so utterly safe..

and it makes me so happy that you went as far as to translate it. It means a lot- Thank you so much! < 3

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User Profile: caringShoulder1357
caringShoulder1357 August 19th

@Pudding1000

Are you the author? A collector?

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User Profile: Pudding1000
Pudding1000 OP August 20th

@caringShoulder1357

Well, I write and post poems on Wattpad for fun! 
Dont know if that really counts as being an author or writer hehe

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User Profile: caringShoulder1357
caringShoulder1357 August 20th

@Pudding1000

Awesome-please continue to share!

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Pudding1000 OP August 21st

@caringShoulder1357

Thank you so much for your kindness; I really appreciate it <3

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User Profile: ArtisticAngel999
ArtisticAngel999 August 19th

@Pudding1000

Hi, Thank you for giving the translation !!!
It's so beautiful and really deep. Thank you for sharing and sending lots of warmth your way ❤️☺️

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Pudding1000 OP August 21st

@ArtisticAngel999

Thank you so much. I hope you have a great day!!! You certainly made mine :) 

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