The Dream (fragment) by me
3ntertainer
August 9th, 2025
All sounds were louder,
And all the colours were brighter,
And I've gone deaf from all the noise,
All this noise makes us harm,
And I've gone blind from all the dark,
All this colour only makes me blind,
And the words all don't talk about me,
And the way all talk to me doesn't feel as they talk to me,
Holding you is just like holding warm water,
Warm water slides, warm water flees,
But I don't mind, it doesn't matter,
We'll shut everything silent as I hold you,
The sun will rise, the dream dies,
Don't wake me up,
Don't wake me up,
Don't wake up.
BastionKnight
August 10th, 2025
@3ntertainer
The way you articulate the feelings in your poem is very relatable. It is very nicely written.