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sickly-sweet sixteen
drowning in its excess - head to toe
how could i fix this?
youve made within me a foe
i can see, vaguely cut
your diamond mind, sincerely impure
no matter the amount of substance,
your speech is already a slur
lace together our fingers
exhaust your aimless, violent urge
save the little thing ive always wanted;
our souls to converge
no longer can i differentiate
between pitter patter of your heart
as much as inconsistent rain -
i think i need a new start.
@lycalias
Your words paint a picture of a deeply draining relationship, like an overly sweet candy that's now making you sick instead of happy. You feel submerged in it, and it seems the other person's words and actions have stirred up a sense of animosity within you. You describe their mind as clever but impure, suggesting their speech has become hurtful regardless of its content. Ultimately, you've reached a point where you can no longer distinguish between their true feelings or actions, pushing you to conclude that you desperately need a fresh start away from all this pain and confusion.
I like how you describe it 🌷🌷 thanks for sharing it 🌷🌷
