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A poem I wrote I know it’s not great

User Profile: Nala31
Nala31 August 23rd, 2023

I’m always so stressed

worrying about everything

I never get any rest

I don’t even have time to catch my breath

every second of every day I’m worrying

I worry about stupid little things

like how I dress

and things like “what will happen once I’m dead?”

there’s always something going through my head

I just need a break

I don’t know how much more of this I can take

I can’t spend any more nights laying awake

I’m driving myself insane

someone please just help me

distract me for even just a day

just help me calm the thoughts in my brain


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User Profile: juliak1968
juliak1968 August 24th, 2023

@Nala31

Hi,

I liked your poem! Very insightful. I write poems about my mental health and found it helps me to sort out my inner thoughts and struggles. Have you tried to chat with any listeners on 7cups? I met some extraordinary people here and hope you have too. Keep writing, you're very good at it!

Blessings, Day

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User Profile: Nala31
Nala31 OP August 24th, 2023

@juliak1968


thank you. This poem meant a lot to me, that’s exactly why I write them because it helps me with my feelings. I hav Ethan app called Rhymers block you should check it out you can post your proms for other people to see. I have tried but I haven’t had much luck I’ve found one really good listener but everyone else I’ve gotten aren’t the best

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juliak1968 August 24th, 2023

@Nala31

That sounds interesting. I have a few poems that really helped me get through some big struggles. I sat on a bench every day for a year as I first went to get on meds and get two therapists and then I wrote this one about that bench:

Writing poems has helped me a lot as i organize my mind, i feel the need to rhyme as I pass the time, reflecting feelings and deeper meanings often coming from my Day dreaming. It seems to me, the blind do see things more eloquently, so i cannot deny these records of my trying to inspire lighting a fire under thee😊 (Where the sun don't see)



Life's a Bench! & Sit Happens!

I imagine this tree was very wise; is now in disguised as a place that I cant watch the time slowly go by, so I shall honor her respectfully by carving her decoratively, a reminiscent of my retrospectively pondering my destiny. 😊

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User Profile: Nala31
Nala31 OP August 24th, 2023

@juliak1968


I have a few that have really helped me too. I’m not the greatest at it I don’t really follow the rules of writing poems I just write what I’m feeling and make it rhyme I guess but it still helps me. You’re poem was really good and I love the play on words for the name

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juliak1968 August 24th, 2023

@Nala31

Awesome, keep enjoying the writing :-) If I can find any other of my poems I will post them here and I hope you do the same 😊

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Nala31 OP August 24th, 2023

@juliak1968


id love to read more of your poems 😊

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juliak1968 August 24th, 2023

@Nala31

PERCEPTION

Perceiving what we believe in is deceiving and has no meaning as life's mistreating dishes out this beating leaving us bleeding..... But we cant see it if we close our minds, and we cant think about this when we're blind, so walk away and you will find, a friend here waiting for a sign! So take your time and organize whats on your mind and you'll find you're not really behind, so relax your eyes and realize you're fine just the way you are. And you can reach for the stars, put cream on the scars and healing transpires. The delusional parts only confuse our goals and corrupt our souls leaving us with a heart full of holes. Set goals now and your mind will see what closed eyes have failed to believe, don't let sight deceive keeping us on our knees; throwing logic into the breeze. Winds at your back excited, Winds of hope reignited me. Step by step confide so we can share secrets of life thinking "what could be" If we let it, if you hold back you'll regret it.
There, Now I've gone and said it!
We hold ourselves down; Dirty on the ground I've found myself tormented and bound by invisibility. I've ignored all possibility, so I must set myself free of a self-inflicted confined mystery that causes so much mind-bending misery

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