Before you .. Critique please

If I die before you..try not to cry too much

You will ponder and sigh I.. I’m sure, too much

Remember the time of light hearted fun, much more

Bring those thoughts to the fore, much more

That is the core of how we soared.

of how we forged and roared with laughter ..and then more some after

Bring those thoughts to the fore and lift your spirits to the rafters!

Today is not a day to go without some prominent laughter

Do celebrate and please don’t hesitate.. I would prefer you weren’t in a state because of my fate.