I want you

@BlatantHonestyi like the simplicity.  As i relate to it very much , it gives the same strange feeling like hopelessness, sort of ambition , pain , etc. 

@BlatantHonesty I agree with Orange64. I love how straightforward and simple this poem is. The repetition creates a deep, unwavering longing—it’s almost hypnotic, making it feel like nothing else in the world matters except this one desire. It carries both hope and hopelessness, tangled together beautifully.