Lessons
Hii since this is my first time posting poetry on here, I wanted to share an old poem I wrote from a few years ago. I’d love any kind of feedback :)
“Lessons”
If I’ve learned anything -
it’s to love.
I get carried away
into galaxies
full of unknown
planets
and wonders
and amazements
of bright stars
shining in a dark sky
full of interesting colors
that I’ve never seen before.
If I’ve learned anything -
it’s to care.
I travel through the mountains
and hike through
the majestic forests;
fly above the clouds
and swim through piranha-infested rivers
just to find you.
And if I’ve learned anything -
it’s to dream
so I follow
my imagination
instead of the other way around
leading to the unreachable
that maybe I’ll one day reach;
and the unthinkable
that I’ve thought of
and maybe…
just maybe
I’ll find more.
But throughout it all
I’ve learned
to be me
and embrace the person
I had never embraced before;
to love the person inside
who’s been with me
every step of the way
@priscamd08
This is beautifully written.
From the heart.
Expressive.
Colourful.
Imaginative.
Vulnerable.
Relatable.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it 🩵🤗
