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User Profile: Dime9878
Dime9878 April 16th

Dead kitten

A dead night who lives in the street rotten away

from emotions

From light

But live in the dark

what a sad sight to see emotions rotting

but thoughts sweeter than ever

only carried by thoughts that maybe I can be a human again

But that kitten who was suppose to be alive but now it’s rotting

But emotions still feel no pity

But I thought about pity

The end

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Dime9878 OP April 17th

If you wanna know the inspiration behind this poem well last year at night I was going to a story but on the street I found a dead kitten I stopped and I just stared at it and in that moment I felt no pity but I thought about pity and that memory of the kitten I can’t stop thinking about it and I decided to write a poem about it well that’s it

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Dime9878 OP April 17th

The Problem about this poem is I don’t know how to rhyme

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User Profile: braveNest6406
braveNest6406 April 17th

@Dime9878  its actually well written, i love it. its already very hard to try and talk about an emotion you felt like you ''had to feel'' in a certain situation. i'm glad poetry helps in writing stuff like this. not all poems have rhymes so this is pretty fair.


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