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She came, She comes

User Profile: Orange64
Orange64 May 3rd, 2025

She came...

I saw...

She talked...

I talked...

In nights she was moon,

She was its moonlight;

She was a flower in heavy noon,

She was its fragrance;

She touched heart soon,

But left with last evening twilight...

No moon came...

All stars sank...

I thought her...

I think her...

I will think her...



She come...

I imagine...

In hallucinations,

She haunt...

I hide...

Of days she is scorching sun,

She is its burn;

In gardens now only cactus run,

She is their thorns;

On heart memories point gun,

But nothing now takes a turn...

Moon won't come...

Stars won't twinkle...

Why I thought her?

Why do i think her?

Will I ever stop thinking her?

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User Profile: Peonywisteria22
Peonywisteria22 May 3rd, 2025

@Orange64

.......... you will move on soon i guess. It seem hard though. Take care  

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User Profile: Orange64
Orange64 OP May 3rd, 2025

@Peonywisteria22 Thanks for reading!! I had actually written it some days before but not posted it. Today when I was going to do the dove one I made changes to this one also......like a lot or difference than the earlier one 😑... Nvm , thanks again!!

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User Profile: politeRaspberries9638
politeRaspberries9638 May 4th, 2025

@Orange64 It's beautiful but poignant A. I love it. Dw things will take a turn one day. But until then ik it's gnawing. I loved the imagery. I pictured a beautiful dark heavenly place in the first half with a nymph descending. Second half is like a mirage while a traveller's is looking for water in a cactus filled desert.

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User Profile: Orange64
Orange64 OP May 4th, 2025

@politeRaspberries9638 Thanks fir reading!!!

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User Profile: Orange64
Orange64 OP May 4th, 2025

@Orange64 *for

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User Profile: Endora
Endora May 4th, 2025

@Orange64 well do you want to stop thinking about her?

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User Profile: Orange64
Orange64 OP May 4th, 2025

@Endora Actually yes ...... lol . I g I will forget one day. 

Thanks for reading !!

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User Profile: Endora
Endora May 4th, 2025

Amen to that

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