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The breakage

User Profile: brokenhalo1998
brokenhalo1998 February 10th, 2025

the pain you feel is ever so real as you enter the depths of *** your searching and searching for a way out in the silence you hear the sound of screams so you listen, then you realize the sound is your screams coming from deeper within the depths of the *** you now endure each day as you look in that mirror and see the breakage of life appear the glass shatters each time your near

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond February 10th, 2025

@brokenhalo1998 This really nails that feeling of being trapped inside your own mind (which is a h3ll on its own). The idea of hearing your own screams and seeing your life break in the mirror is so intense and raw—it is something most of us can relate.

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User Profile: brokenhalo1998
brokenhalo1998 OP February 10th, 2025

Thank you I appreciate it

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User Profile: ZenArashi
ZenArashi February 12th, 2025

@brokenhalo1998

Halo, I can sense the sensation of falling into the abyss of pain in this poem. Heartbreaking ❤️‍🩹

My heart goes to you and please keep on writing. 

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User Profile: brokenhalo1998
brokenhalo1998 OP February 12th, 2025

Thank you so much zen

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