Weird World (Poem)
Oh Weird World
Is everything I do wrong?
I feel that I'm losing it.
Losing my mind, as I try to feel fine.
Is all hope gone?
Is my life an ending song?
Am I so bad, that I just drive people mad?
Why must I be so sad?
@tryingtosurvive2024
Touching.
This could be lyrics to a song.
@trueconfidant123 Correct. All of my poetry has that vibe to it. It's because I listened to a whole lot of songs. For as long as I can remember, I've always been a lyrical kind of guy.
@tryingtosurvive2024
And, to be honest even your reply sounds lyrical haha.
Music therapy/ poem
It was a burning
It was a forest of mourning
I paint the tides red on my face
So I’ll still see your shades
I’m sick
A facade
Trembling waters
Wouldn’t question
Our chemicals were divergent.
All I can feel is the pain
All I am is your love
Even if love destroys us.
I am something that you made me
Beyond that I’m no memory
Will I cease to exist if I don’t let you hurt me?
And I don’t want to be left behind
It was a burning
It was a forest of mourning.
@determinedSquare9605 Woe! Thanks for sharing. 😀 That is interesting.... Do think these two poems kinda talk to each other???
Thankyou -Well this is my poem! I mistakenly submitted it under your poem. That would’ve been an interesting thought-provoker tho :)
@determinedSquare9605 🤓 ok
@determinedSquare9605 👏👏 that was such a sad but beautifully written poem 💖
@tryingtosurvive2024 😥 aww that was really sad 🙁 but you expressed yourself so well, I'm proud of you 💗 can't wait to hear more from you💖
@Tinywhisper11 Thank you Tiny. 😄 Your hugging GIFs remind me of the snuggle bear.
😍You are a sweetie!😍
@tryingtosurvive2024 💖💖💖