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User Profile: NicoRose
NicoRose March 9th, 2025

hello i drew a page in my book and was wondering if someone could help me with poetry to write on the page

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond March 10th, 2025

@NicoRose Hello NicoRose... Do you mean helping you write a poem or writing one for you?

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User Profile: NicoRose
NicoRose OP March 10th, 2025

@azurePond any suggestions are fine with me :)

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond March 10th, 2025

@NicoRose Okay... so what kind of poems are you looking for? If you can describe or show what you drew that would be helpful—but if not... No worries! Just describe the vibes!

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NicoRose OP March 10th, 2025

@azurePond i guess like a love story but its not meant to be is the kind of vibes

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond March 11th, 2025

@NicoRose Apologies...But by a love that is not meant to be ...did you mean it's a secret love, a love forbidden by society, a love doomed by fate or one that arrived unexpectedly but was never meant to stay? (It is to narrow it down)
Tagging some poets who may be able to help you , If I may ... @ZenArashi
@BastionKnight @suu1309 @twerp

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User Profile: twerp
twerp March 14th, 2025

@azurePond @NicoRose

I have been summoned 👀 

I love the theme “forbidden love”!!  A desire so strong and powerful…but restricted by what?  The first step I’d take is to find the vibe of your poem.  Is it a love that powers through hardship? Maybe one that is destined to be forever tied down by whatever restriction(s) you chose. In other words, is it more happy or solemn? (😀/🙁) Do you want your words to be angry or tranquil? (😡/😌) Perhaps a mix of both.  That’s what I love about poetry, it has no boundaries on emotion.

One thing previously mentioned by Knight is to use imagery.  Imagery brings your poem to life! If I were to use your theme “Forbidden love” I’d use figurative language, colors, movement words (sway, swept, dashed, pranced) to describe how I feel or the story I want to tell. For instance, “Our love is like the morning wind.  Moving along the world till it awakes with daring reds and soft blends. Brushing through the hair of the blooming trees, zooming through this world at lighting speeds. Our love is like the morning breeze, cool and beautiful in all ways things could be.” 

One other thing is to read other works!  

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twerp March 14th, 2025

Oopsies didn’t mean to hit send lol. XD 

Here’s a continuation. 

As I was saying, reading other poetry.  Lord Bryon, Emily Dickinson, Pablo Neruda, Rabindranath Tagore, and Shakespeare all have some worthy love poetry.  I would also recommend reading in the poetry forum here. Lots of amazing poets who can inspire you beyond belief. 

I would like to note I am rather new to poetry myself, so anything I say is advice from other poets I've met.  I’m glad you’re reaching out and learning! I’m hoping to see your artwork once you are done.  Good luck. 🍀 

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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight March 11th, 2025

@NicoRose

*Thanks @azurePond shyly for the tag*

I was not sure if you what you meant by suggestions was tips, inspiration, or thematic hooks, so I hope my modest contribution to this post is useful in some small way:

Try and get inside the character(s) mind and imagine what they feel. Or if you can draw on your own experiences, use those. You need not make it sound dramatic, as honest and heartfelt emotions will be much more impactful. 

Use imagery which is vivid. Nature works well for its beauty, fragility, and transient nature. Celestial or elemental forces give a sense of passion (either positive or painful). Colours and sensations can add depth to emotional descriptions or even work as replacements for an emotion word. Similes are useful for subtle suggestions of intensity of emotion; an example that comes to mind is from Romeo and Juliet:

"My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite" - William Shakespeare

When using metaphors, classic choices can give the poem a gentle, naïve quality. But for more vibrant emotional pieces I would suggest that you try more unusual pairings. John Donnes 'The Flea' is a good example of an unusual extended metaphor for a love/lover that can elevate standard love tropes into something memorable. In it the poet uses a flea as a symbol of their illicit love, of commitment to each, of physical love, and of the vagaries and passions of his and his paramours relationship. The more unique the metaphor, the more it will likely make the poem stand out.

As you have said the love is not meant to be, playing with contrasts can give the sense of being torn and add to the atmosphere of desire versus reality. Light vs dark, warmth vs cold, passion vs restraint, joy vs despair, desire vs destiny, etc.

The particular choice of structure can add a great deal to the emotional feel of the poem: Haiku can give it a subtle, immaculate perfection or capture a fleeting moment. Free verse can make the poem feel raw and unfiltered, as if one is spilling out everything in honest declaration. A single rhyming couplet can give a powerful and memorable impression that capture the intensity of the feelings. A longer stanza can allow emotions to be built up and reach crescendo or maybe drawn down into softer regret and/or resignation. Maybe also consider the rhythm and sound of your lines; soft consonants or vowels sounds and unstressed words can give a gentle feel, whilst harsh and stressed ones can give a more intense and immediate feel and highlight pain or fierce emotions. Steady and repeating rhythm and symmetrical syllable counts can make the poem feel hypnotic/melodic and work nicely for conveying an air of appreciation/adoration or make the poem feel intimate. Conversely, irregular choices can convey scattered thoughts, emotional turmoil. A single offbeat line or couplet in an otherwise regular stanza/poem can bring sharp focus on it...a bit like suddenly cutting a piece of music short with an off note or loud clash, giving it great impact. 

Spend some time thinking about the last line. It will sum up the feelings you wish to convey and leave the lasting impression of the whole poem, so it should do justice to what you are trying to create.

Hmm, that is all I could think of at the moment. I freely admit that my knowledge and skillset is very limited, but hope that something I wrote might prove useful. Apologies if it was a bit long winded.

Good luck, and hope you choose to display your poem and art once it is complete.



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User Profile: FernsAndFirelight
FernsAndFirelight March 11th, 2025

@NicoRose hey hi bud! seems like you're in for a tragic love tale? like one sided or relationship issues, and breaking up considering it the mature decision. something like la la land?

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