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User Profile: tokkittalgi
tokkittalgi October 17th, 2024

tell me what's real,
please. 
tell me what i need,
and what i should be.
for i can't feel it, for anything.

i live in a box with no holes.
my words never carry,
they echo, but it never shows.
my head makes sure im never alone.

i sit, and i wait,
for the moment i feel i can let go.
i sit unblinking, until my limbs grow weak.
the dawn comes for many, but never for me.

what's a mind that can't mind itself?
what's the fun in a mind that can't mend?
dear, hold my hand,
for i fear when i reach my wit's end;
and that i'm already there.

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User Profile: BelovedMe
BelovedMe October 17th, 2024

@tokkittalgiFeeling trapped in your thoughts, huh? Sounds like you're in need of a little escape hatch from that box! 🚪✨ Just remember, the dawn is patient—it’ll come when you least expect it. 🌅 Until then, hold tight. You’re stronger than you think! 💪🎈



User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE October 21st, 2024

@tokkittalgi You should know that you are awesome and that there is light at the end of this tunnel...just keep going on for we are with you and you are not alone.😊 FIGHTING!!

User Profile: LoveMyMoonflowers
LoveMyMoonflowers October 22nd, 2024

@tokkittalgi *offers hugs* (no pressure) 💜 i think you write very well. 

User Profile: azurePond
azurePond October 22nd, 2024

@tokkittalgi The 3rd stanza from 'I sit and wait' to 'Dawn comes for many, but not for me' - described something that I have been struggling to put into words. I hope  this polar night ends and dawn comes for you - cause, you know, no matter what the dawn will come. You will see light.