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Blanket of Blankness

User Profile: twerp
twerp March 15th, 2025

I am blessed with blankness 

A sad sight you’d think, yes,

I am a poet with no words in their head.

The type of empty that I am bred

is as full as a used up paint can.

“I can, I can, I can’t.”

My work is adorned on your walls

Beautiful colors, but here’s where I fall,

I am not those works at all.

I am the holder to them, thanked for my service,

then discarded once I hold no purpose.

So then why do I say I am blessed?

It is a curse to be unfound,

like a blank page floating around without bound.

But today, I am blessed even then.

A full paint can once again.

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond March 15th, 2025

@twerp This sooo good Twerp!  the way you capture emptiness—not as mere absence but as something once full.... something discarded yet still holding potential—is deeply moving. The imagery of a used up paint can, once vibrant and now forgotten, hits hard (A metaphor for so many things we feel but fail to put into words….. yet you did put them into words!) And that last line... the quiet triumph of being full again—it’s beautiful. Your words paint their own masterpiece. Thank you for sharing this 💙🎨

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User Profile: twerp
twerp OP March 15th, 2025

Dear @azurePond ,

Hello, azure! Your comments never fail to make inspired. 🌞🤍 I felt bad for containers because their sole purpose is just to you know..contain.  Which is where I got the paint can idea. 💡 🎨 I would like to note that at the end there is triumph, but there is also indefinite fail.

You’re a full paint can again, full of use and need but as soon as you’re done you are right back in the same spot.  Why I see it as a blessing is that I’d rather take the chance of that momentary fulfillment than never getting it at all.

Once again, thank you for reading my work and offering such kind words. Receiving them from a poet I admire greatly means more to me than you could ever know. *Grins* 

Sincerely,

Twerp.

(Also I love the new profile)

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond March 16th, 2025

@twerp Dear Twerp,

I love the way you see the paint can’s cycle—not just as a fate... but as a choice... a willingness to embrace fulfillment even if it’s fleeting. There’s something beautifully human in that. You make readers reconsider things they'd otherwise overlook and that’s a gift in itself.

I’m honoured by your kind words... though I think the admiration is mutual. Grins back

And thank you! I’m glad you like the new profile… now I am a pond cosplaying as the sea 🌊

Sincerely,
Azure

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