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The Birth of a Heart

User Profile: azurePond
azurePond October 23rd, 2024

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The air smelled damp and woody even inside

Coarse soil beneath groaned with each weighted stride

Mud streaks from my boots

Tracing one last connection to my muffled crime

The shovel's fall echoed, a metallic cry inside

Marble tiles, like ribs, crack 

I took in my surrounding

With each heavy breathe

I felt less hollow within

Through the foggy window pane

I could see my newest grave

With a sigh

I removed that loss which weighed me down

The sticky shirt, of crimson and brown,

With a hand on my chest,

I traced the faint scar

Encircled by clot and strife

A faint lub dub

Aha! About time it had grown back

Under my palm,

The iambic beats whispered

"You need not place this new heart in the ground."

I hope ;

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wIthpeACE October 24th, 2024

@azurePond

KUDOS TO UR IMAGINATION...they way u write it's like a story.🥰

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azurePond OP October 26th, 2024

@wIthpeACE Thank you so much!!

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wIthpeACE October 26th, 2024

@azurePond

ur welcome!!

[p.s. can i tag u in any other posts-like for motivation or uplifting?]

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azurePond OP October 26th, 2024

@wIthpeACE Yes, u can.. (I didnt know that u could tag people- Im new here)

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wIthpeACE October 26th, 2024

@azurePond

U sure can, azure!! It is a way to support people. We tag people we know support someone new or someone who is having a sad day. We shower them with support messages and pics and gifs. :)

THANK U for accepting BTW!!

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azurePond OP October 26th, 2024

@wIthpeACE wow... that is wonderful! THANK U!

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azurePond OP October 26th, 2024

@wIthpeACE How does it work, though? Do I just reply to the post in which I have been tagged by you and tag the person I'm sending love to?

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wIthpeACE October 26th, 2024

@azurePondYeah azure!! u got it..!

Just reply to the main post and tag them instead of the original poster [op]..


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azurePond OP October 27th, 2024

@wIthpeACE ok, thank u!

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