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Tides And Storms All Around

User Profile: SilverMistakes
SilverMistakes February 25th, 2023

Tides and storm all around

No place left to hide


Why is fate so cruel?

I always wonder

Had it been a little less injust.

I would have been...

What's the point??

Because I am not any of them


I craved to hear

That its okay to stop

But like the fool I was

I thought you understood me


Oh my love

You are my world

Within it l live

Without it i tarnish


With teary eyes

I beg for your answer

Did you ever really hear me

when I told you

I needed to rest?




This is an old poem I wrote. I came across this today and thought of sharing. Please share your thoughts about it. Remember all feedbacks are appreciated!!💖


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User Profile: LikeAnArcane
LikeAnArcane February 25th, 2023

Poem is very heart touching especially the last stanza..

Keep writing!! 🤍🫂

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User Profile: SilverMistakes
SilverMistakes OP February 26th, 2023

@LikeAnArcane

Thank you. Glad you liked it ! I love the last stanza too😊

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