peace in the storm
politePlace5370
November 22nd, 2025
The roll of thunder.
Tumbling drops fall from the Heavens.
And I stand in the midst of it all,
smiling.
CherryRed21
November 22nd, 2025
@thebendygirl
Beautiful ♡
I love storm metaphors a lot. I think they truly carry what our hearts feel when we go through mental agony. I admire the approach you have to the storm inside of you, you stand there, taking the hit all while smiling. It is not easy to do that, it takes courage and a lot of willpower.
Stay strong <3
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@CherryRed21
thank you! I love getting feedback, I don’t write a lot, but I’m trying to get better :)
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CherryRed21
November 22nd, 2025
The best part about poetry is that it's subjective! Your piece is beautiful as it is (so are you 💌)
I wish you all the best in your journey! I would love to read more of your poems if you're up for it.
Lots of love <3
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