I've been writing poems i was told to share but others say they are stupid n lame

Each day I try to tell myself that It’s fine,

Each night I try to calm my rage,

Each hour I try it to let go,

Each minute I try to move on,

Each second I wish not to mourn,

But it feels like you have taken over my whole body,

And you have stabbed my soul,

Have you ever felt this madness and sadness,

That you could sense your body screaming and in Pain,

Or it’s just with me.