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Poem | Depression (Trigger Warning)

User Profile: PinkDahlia22
PinkDahlia22 August 10th, 2016

So i shared this in the literature section but i wanted to share it here just because some may be able to relate! :P

******************TRIGGER WARNING****************

A girl is trapped

no reason why

this is her story

go on read, don't be shy

A black cloud grows thicker and thicker

The darkness large, the light is hidden.

All alone, im getting sicker

try to eascap- it seems forbidden.

Trapped here and no where to go

i terrified in my own company

starting to think - oh no

this wont end well, you'll see

Remembering all the faults in her life

Every mistake she made

all she wish is that she had a knife

so to rest she could be laid

she felt there was no way out

but there was nothing else she could do

so as she was searching all about

a little light grew

she walked towards the light

hopefull that things would change

6 years of a long hard fight

No more depression, wouldnt that be strange

she reached as far as she could

desperate to be happy you have no idea

She let her self feel hope like you would

but suddenly the light was to dissapear

The light was gone

nothing was left

but a rope to tie around her neck.

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User Profile: Celaeno
Celaeno August 10th, 2016

@JoyIntoDarkness, I think it's good that you post your poem also in here. Some may think that this is too morbid, but this disorder isn't beautiful. There is no good way to describe its dread and misery. The pain is raw and overwhelming, but using your words to express it, shows who has the real strength in this fight. I'm proud of you.

Thank you for sharing, lovely ❤︎

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User Profile: PinkDahlia22
PinkDahlia22 OP August 10th, 2016

@Celaeno

Hehe i love writing i have written a poem here before called the mask that i could share... it is like presenting the idea that we always cover up our illnesses i can tag you if you want to see it! Again thankyou! It wasnt easy sharing how i truly feeel... i dont really have much hope no more....

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User Profile: brokengirl1
brokengirl1 August 10th, 2016

@JoyIntoDarkness keep writing <3

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PinkDahlia22 OP August 10th, 2016

@brokengirl1

thankyou i will hehe <3

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brokengirl1 August 10th, 2016

@JoyIntoDarkness you are talented <3

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PinkDahlia22 OP August 10th, 2016

@brokengirl1

thankyou i will hehe <3

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User Profile: FlowersOfHope
FlowersOfHope August 11th, 2016

@JoyIntoDarkness

I love your writing. 💜💜

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PinkDahlia22 OP August 11th, 2016

@Hopemaybloom

Thankyou x

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User Profile: Nicola2468
Nicola2468 August 11th, 2016

@JoyIntoDarkness - This is a really good poem! You obviously have a lot of talent within your writing, as this highlighted a lot of different things. I really appreicate you posting this, and you should definitely write more!smiley

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User Profile: PinkDahlia22
PinkDahlia22 OP August 13th, 2016

@Nicola2468

Thankyou!! I wrote one aboutt 7 cups on here too haha xx <3

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User Profile: BellaFreedom
BellaFreedom August 13th, 2016

@JoyIntoDarkness It is amazing! Keep it up. i am glad you are creative and living upto your potential. Go on Joy, more power to you! <3

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PinkDahlia22 OP August 13th, 2016

@BellaFreedom

Thankyou it means alot! <3

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