My poem
My flower wont bloom Nor does it dry up It wont rain Nor do the dark clouds go away I am in the middle of ice But it wont melt I am stuck I am turning to stone But i do nothing I am not surprised I don't freak out Like i said i do nothing I continue becoming a stone There are walls all around me I try hard Very hard to break them But they wont budge And yet i cant give up either I have to keep trying to break Unbreakable walls ....forever Go on tell me how terrible it is Thanks Bye
@blue12568
Hey, that's such a very beautiful depiction, I loved reading through and somewhere I could sense what you must be feeling and experiencing while penning this poem , isn't a beautiful poem supposed to do that ? Make people feel connected with the poet ?❤
It feels as though ,you're expressing feelings of being stuck at one place, so stuck that there's neither a front or a back door to turn to, it feels like being in a difficult spot , where you want to break through the walls limiting you, but they aren't easy to break, good thing is that you're determined to try breaking those and I am sure, someday you certainly will 😊❤
You did a great job expressing yourself *offering hugs* ❤
Hey @sunisshinningandsoareyou I have to admit i love ur name A. Thank you thank you thank u so so so so so much. It means soooo much to me B. Yes i am stuck And u described much better than me C. Thank u again Bcuz of u, i am gonna keep writing D. This was my first poem expressing myself And i got such a great response I am just so happy rn Thank u again for making my day Hope u have a good day
Sorry the name is wrong @Sunisshiningandsoareyou
I am stuck And thanks soo much It means alot This is my first poem Expressing myself Thanks so so much Means a hell lot to me But yea i am stuck I was not so sure about this poem But alright i made this super awkward already So thank u
