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I need critiques for lyrics I'm writing

At a table for two

Letting me vent, taking all of my mess

Coffee got cold but you stayed anyway

That's when I knew you were here to stay

People ask questions when you hold my hand

Judging the lines and where they blur


You're just my person, that’s all I can say

Looking at us like it's destined to be

But you're everything I need, just not how they think

No pressure, no labels, no guarantees

You're just my person, and that's enough for me

That's enough for me


You sat on the floor when my world fell apart

Asked no questions, just sat by my side

Your head on my shoulder, my hand in your coat

You're the steady hand keeping me afloat.

They see what we have and they think they know more

But this love needs no name to be pure


You're just my person, that’s all I can say

Looking at us like it's written in stars

But you're everything I need, just not how they think

No pressure, no labels, no guarantees

You're just my person, and that's enough for me

That's enough for me


Some hearts heal with distance

Some with a gentle hand

We don't have to cross that line

I’m not yours and you’re not mine

I’ll leave the rest to fate’s design


You're just my person, and that won't change

Writing our own rules, no need to explain

You're everything I need, just not how they think

No pressure, no labels, no guarantees

You're just my person, and that's enough for me

Yeah, that's enough for me

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User Profile: AsherTree
AsherTree May 26th

Hello @SmollPeridotsBreakdown.

"That's enough for me."

I loved it!

I'm not a critic so I can't effectively give you input but it flowed like a fine wine to me...

I think your very talented,  good luck!🌟