I need critiques for lyrics I'm writing
At a table for two
Letting me vent, taking all of my mess
Coffee got cold but you stayed anyway
That's when I knew you were here to stay
People ask questions when you hold my hand
Judging the lines and where they blur
You're just my person, that’s all I can say
Looking at us like it's destined to be
But you're everything I need, just not how they think
No pressure, no labels, no guarantees
You're just my person, and that's enough for me
That's enough for me
You sat on the floor when my world fell apart
Asked no questions, just sat by my side
Your head on my shoulder, my hand in your coat
You're the steady hand keeping me afloat.
They see what we have and they think they know more
But this love needs no name to be pure
You're just my person, that’s all I can say
Looking at us like it's written in stars
But you're everything I need, just not how they think
No pressure, no labels, no guarantees
You're just my person, and that's enough for me
That's enough for me
Some hearts heal with distance
Some with a gentle hand
We don't have to cross that line
I’m not yours and you’re not mine
I’ll leave the rest to fate’s design
You're just my person, and that won't change
Writing our own rules, no need to explain
You're everything I need, just not how they think
No pressure, no labels, no guarantees
You're just my person, and that's enough for me
Yeah, that's enough for me
Hello @SmollPeridotsBreakdown.
"That's enough for me."
I loved it!
I'm not a critic so I can't effectively give you input but it flowed like a fine wine to me...
I think your very talented, good luck!🌟