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final draft

User Profile: helpfulBunny6682
helpfulBunny6682 December 4th, 2023

I edited the lyrics like 8 or 9 different times. I hope its better than the first draft. I made sure to fix all the spelling errors. I think..... Also i wanna thank 2 people on here they know who they are. Thanks for helping me i couldnt have done any of this without you. A & C

Final draft 

Name : My bestie my hero my sister goodbye


I held you tight while you faded away in my arms that night

I held you close to me one last time

Hoping you would stay


Begging you not to go

Dont leave me alone in this world alone

My bestest friend the hero of my life

full of love and full of light


Dont let go keep on fighting for me alright

Stay alive dont fade away from my life from my reality

Everythings gonna be alright

all you have to do is fight


As she closed her eyes and took her last breath

She said everythings going to be fine

As long as you know I will love you always and forever for eternity

Everythings gonna be alright my little sister


As she said those words she drifted away from me

To a far far place away from my reality from this world

She was Gone forever never coming back

No matter what I yelled or scream

No life was brought back for me


My bestfriend my hero my sister

You were gone

never coming back


My bestie my hero my sister goodbye

Im sorry i couldnt save you on that terrible night

God know i tried but it was just your time

time to leave time to go time to move to a different place'

time to be at peace and have your happiness to be at rest


I held you tight while you faded away from me on that terrible night

I held you close one last time

Hoping you would stay

But it was your time


Everything wasnt alright

In order for it to be alright to be fine

I have to let go of you, i have to move on


Goodbye my friend

My hero in my life,My sister forever

Im so sorry, i love you always and forever for eternity

goodbye


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User Profile: Alexo0010
Alexo0010 December 9th, 2023

@helpfulBunny6682 this some is really deep but also really good. Im glad you took your time to write them im proud of you:)

User Profile: free2118
free2118 February 1st, 2024

@helpfulBunny6682

i love the lyrics!! and the refrain is really good. i think it really shows an emphasis on how to keep going in life even if maybe you don't have that one person anymore. well written(: