final draft
I edited the lyrics like 8 or 9 different times. I hope its better than the first draft. I made sure to fix all the spelling errors. I think..... Also i wanna thank 2 people on here they know who they are. Thanks for helping me i couldnt have done any of this without you. A & C
Final draft
Name : My bestie my hero my sister goodbye
I held you tight while you faded away in my arms that night
I held you close to me one last time
Hoping you would stay
Begging you not to go
Dont leave me alone in this world alone
My bestest friend the hero of my life
full of love and full of light
Dont let go keep on fighting for me alright
Stay alive dont fade away from my life from my reality
Everythings gonna be alright
all you have to do is fight
As she closed her eyes and took her last breath
She said everythings going to be fine
As long as you know I will love you always and forever for eternity
Everythings gonna be alright my little sister
As she said those words she drifted away from me
To a far far place away from my reality from this world
She was Gone forever never coming back
No matter what I yelled or scream
No life was brought back for me
My bestfriend my hero my sister
You were gone
never coming back
My bestie my hero my sister goodbye
Im sorry i couldnt save you on that terrible night
God know i tried but it was just your time
time to leave time to go time to move to a different place'
time to be at peace and have your happiness to be at rest
I held you tight while you faded away from me on that terrible night
I held you close one last time
Hoping you would stay
But it was your time
Everything wasnt alright
In order for it to be alright to be fine
I have to let go of you, i have to move on
Goodbye my friend
My hero in my life,My sister forever
Im so sorry, i love you always and forever for eternity
goodbye
@helpfulBunny6682 this some is really deep but also really good. Im glad you took your time to write them im proud of you:)
@helpfulBunny6682
i love the lyrics!! and the refrain is really good. i think it really shows an emphasis on how to keep going in life even if maybe you don't have that one person anymore. well written(: