[TW] Ash's Poetry ! ( I'd love feedback ! )
ashaftertherain
September 27th, 2022
! Potentially upsetting emotional content !
( Yelling , mentions of sanity , crying , etc . )
I could stop it
I could stop the fights
I could stop the yelling
That plagued my head with sprawling thoughts
I could stop it
I could stop the tears
I could stop the begging
The pleading to make all of the pain vanish
So why can’t I stop this ?
Like a storm , crackling , rippling
A force of nature
I never stood a chance
It’s so simple
Just put it down
Lock it away , chains , destroy the key
But I can’t
I can’t live without it
My sanity dripping through my fingers
Each time
I fail
innateJoy9602
September 27th, 2022
@ashaftertherain
Very impactful poem!
I can feel the emotions and yearning!
Thanks so much for sharing! Beautifully written💛💫