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[TW] Ash's Poetry ! ( I'd love feedback ! )

User Profile: ashaftertherain
ashaftertherain September 27th, 2022

! Potentially upsetting emotional content !

( Yelling , mentions of sanity , crying , etc . )



I could stop it

I could stop the fights

I could stop the yelling

That plagued my head with sprawling thoughts


I could stop it

I could stop the tears

I could stop the begging

The pleading to make all of the pain vanish


So why can’t I stop this ?

Like a storm , crackling , rippling

A force of nature

I never stood a chance


It’s so simple

Just put it down

Lock it away , chains , destroy the key

But I can’t


I can’t live without it

My sanity dripping through my fingers

Each time

I fail


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User Profile: innateJoy9602
innateJoy9602 September 27th, 2022

@ashaftertherain

Very impactful poem!

I can feel the emotions and yearning!

Thanks so much for sharing! Beautifully written💛💫