[TW] Dark and Cold
I’ve been here a while and I’m tired of the cold.
I’m young, I have purpose!-Or so I’ve been told.
The days are so tiring, nights sleepless and long,
I should stay to help people, but am I really that strong?
My brain tells me it’s useless, yet my body’s alive. I’m tired of pain, I haven’t any more drive.
I should stay here and live, I can’t surrender my fight. But what would it matter if I turned off the light?
Am I worthy of staying, or will I only cause pain? All of these questions are hurting my brain.
I’ve been here a while, I’ve felt so much cold. Will I get to leave soon, or should I stay and grow old?
-burningRain127
Thanks for the idea @retro0ne
I really like this Rain. It flows well, and it makes me think about it. Every line, every piece, it all sits so well. This was done really well.
Thanks doc, my head definitely feels more clear after writing this. I also saw some of the cool poems you wrote, like “the mines”, which is a subject I’m interested in. I hope you’re doing well
@burningRain127
Very well done poem!! It was really nice to read :)
