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[TW] Stay

User Profile: burningRain127
burningRain127 March 15th, 2023

Don’t leave me alone, oh can you please stay?

I have no talent to offer and no wise words to say.

I’m broken and bruised, and I can’t heal your heart,

but would you please sit here with me through the dark?


I say I don’t need you, that I’m fine by myself-

but I’ve been there and done that and now I need help

For I want so much to leave, so give me a reason

To stay through the pain, and wait out this season.


Don’t leave me alone, oh can you please stay?

For it’s midnight right now, and not yet close to day.

I’m flawed and I’m wounded, I can’t see the sun,

but I’m beginning to think that we all need someone.


I’ve lost many already, we all have, I know

but I’m so very tired of death’s painful blows

I don’t deserve kindness- I’ve not much to give,

But would you stay here with me, and show me how to live?








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User Profile: Mya000
Mya000 March 16th, 2023

@burningRain127

Your poem is very touching and relatable to many people who have felt alone and lost. It takes a lot of courage to reach out and ask someone to stay with you through the dark times, and I commend you for doing so through your words. It's okay to feel broken and bruised, and it's important to have someone to lean on during those moments. Your vulnerability and honesty are admirable, and I hope you find someone who will stay with you and help you through this season. Remember that you are worthy of love and kindness, and that there is always hope even in the darkest of times. Keep writing and expressing yourself through your words, as they are a powerful tool for healing and growth 😊

User Profile: juliak1968
juliak1968 March 16th, 2023

@burningRain127

Very nice poem!! I hope are being here with you helps you a bunch!

Big blessings, Day

March 16th, 2023

@burningRain127

This is beautiful. Just superb. It’s a feeling that can be described but you, you have wrote it in a poem so majestically. It’s relatable when you’re broken, when you have nobody, when you have no shoulder to cry on but then you see a person. That person is that somebody who you can trust. This poem is wonderful. Don’t stop writing Poet/Poetess! You can do it!

User Profile: LikeAnArcane
LikeAnArcane March 19th, 2023

@burningRain127

Just Splendid buddy!

This poem really is beautiful and touching 🤍

Keep writing such amazing works 🤍

User Profile: juliak1968
juliak1968 October 11th, 2023

@burningRain127

I read it again and liked it even more!!