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losing life

User Profile: PicklesANDOcean4ever
PicklesANDOcean4ever September 26th

TW// sh and su!side


losing life

as I make the lines

the bl00d drips reflected In my eyes

wanting to d!e 

but I have to hide

cant let it slip

but the pool is expanding

the darkness below me

never letting me free

cutting my hair 

trying to let go

too many scabs making it harder

I must realize this cant go any farther

I ignore all the warnings

keep pushing on

as long as I hide 

nothing will go wrong

pulling my sleeves

checking my jeans

making sure nobody sees

lie all the way

leave them behind

just keep on telling them that I'm fine

I come onto here to get some relief 

because you guys wont tell 

you guys wont cry

I take a deep breath smile and try

to put on a show 

and make her believe

as long as I lie my secrets will be safe

and I dont care if I keep losing life

(sorry if ts is kinda nonsense)


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User Profile: AsherTree
AsherTree September 26th

@PicklesANDOcean4ever

Excellent poem! It took us into a world of friction..

It seemed to be about the chaos that lots of people find themselves at..

Thanks for sharing! 🌲

User Profile: PicklesANDOcean4ever
PicklesANDOcean4ever OP September 26th

@AsherTree

ty! and a little bit its mostly about my current mental health status

User Profile: AsherTree
AsherTree September 26th

@PicklesANDOcean4ever

Wow, you are really going through alot of thoughts and feelings from what the poem suggests.. i'm glad you found a hobby like poetry to give you encouragement!  

Thank you for sharing!  🌲

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User Profile: niceJoy9189
niceJoy9189 September 27th

@PicklesANDOcean4ever im here for you

User Profile: PicklesANDOcean4ever
PicklesANDOcean4ever OP September 27th

@niceJoy9189

ty joy 🫶

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