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A frail thing

User Profile: HearshotKid
HearshotKid March 20th

I wrote this poem years ago, when I was a younger man and still had a passion for things like that. I've never showed it to anyone, but I came across it today and wondered why not post it here?

I hope you all like it. We probably need more upbeat poetry around here, but it's all I've got on deck at the moment.

Please enjoy.

A Frail Thing

A frail thing be this heart of mine

To weathered weariness and despond resigns

A traveler burdened by rough road and time

A pilgrim whom seeks only rest

Though empathy given, by strife undaunted

Bearing deserved scars with pride unwanted

With solidity bared for those beloved

It reserves no strength for me

When it speaks aloud it speaks of fear

Of falling victim to the insincere

Offering affinity and passion endeared

To be only dismissed in turn

Yet unwilling am I to order retreat

Or submit to humble and wary defeat

The great mission I hold as of yet incomplete

To reach my end empty of love

For any remaining would be but a waste

A sin, borne of mistrust and hubris and haste

Ever shall I gift every bit of the grace

Of this frail and hopeful thing of mine

If you made it this far then thanks for taking the time to read the whole thing. You're a hero.

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User Profile: Amanda84
Amanda84 March 20th

@HearshotKid

Thank you for sharing.

You have a beautiful way of expressing words 

Weaving them into a relatable, genuine tale from the heart.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it 🩵🤗

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HearshotKid OP March 20th

@Amanda84

Much obliged. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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Amanda84 March 20th

@HearshotKid

🩵🤗

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humanbeing578 March 21st

It takes incredible courage to write and see ❤️ 😊

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HearshotKid OP March 22nd

@humanbeing578

That's true. Maybe courage was what I was going for here. I'm glad to hear that was your takeaway.

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@HearshotKid I enjoyed reading what you wrote. This was lovely to read. 😊

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HearshotKid OP March 22nd

@warmwhisperingflower

Thank you, that means a lot to me. I have piles of this stuff laying around from back in the day, but few eyes have ever seen them.

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