An study in poetries petals
"Softly it opens like the scrolls of old
Gentler tho than even old parchment,
Softer than silken sheets made for Queens
Fuller in colour than a young maidens lips
Supported by the strong Eiffel Tower
Yet protected still by a warzone's sharp razer wire
It's beauty to great to be held up above
So only with pain will anyone deliver it's love
Aroma of beauty not even Paris compares
All women adore it for days still unheard
Men pay gold over life times just to acquire
Sight of its splendor on their wife's window spire"
"Hmmm a fitting repose, for life's wonderful Rose
Such a beautiful flower, I could stare at for hours
Gentle sight to behold, a gift in the household
Yet this student of life fears she won't ever receive that genuine love revealed their softly falling petals"
*The book closes softly as her voice fades away,
Eyes ache with longing towards a empty vase.*
This was me trying to describe a rose with the stereotypical flowery words (the words used to describe flowers) it was sorta an exercise at first to try to have better writing. But then I felt the need to make it sorta a story, a young poet reading her mentors old book of poems
Thank you any one who read it 🩵
@7Bear7
Thank you for sharing 💙
Always appreciate your poems!
I hope you are good my friend 💚🤗

@Amanda84
You are welcome, and thank you for reading.
I posted two including this one the other night.
I uh I'm eh, been having some difficult and bad days, but luckily most of those days have some good to great moment sprinkled throughout, and the occasionally good day too. So over all kinda eh but not horrible which is good I think lol
Thank you for being here Amanda, have a blessed day
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@7Bear7
A pleasure 💚
I genuinely hope the good days outweigh the bad 🩷