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An study in poetries petals

User Profile: 7Bear7
7Bear7 June 1st

"Softly it opens like the scrolls of old 

Gentler tho than even old parchment, 

Softer than silken sheets made for Queens 

Fuller in colour than a young maidens lips


Supported by the strong Eiffel Tower 

Yet protected still by a warzone's sharp razer wire 

It's beauty to great to be held up above

So only with pain will anyone deliver it's love


Aroma of beauty not even Paris compares

All women adore it for days still unheard

Men pay gold over life times just to acquire 

Sight of its splendor on their wife's window spire"


"Hmmm a fitting repose, for life's wonderful Rose 

Such a beautiful flower, I could stare at for hours

Gentle sight to behold, a gift in the household


Yet this student of life fears she won't ever receive that genuine love revealed their softly falling petals"

*The book closes softly as her voice fades away,

Eyes ache with longing towards a empty vase.*



This was me trying to describe a rose with the stereotypical flowery words (the words used to describe flowers) it was sorta an exercise at first to try to have better writing. But then I felt the need to make it sorta a story, a young poet reading her mentors old book of poems 


Thank you any one who read it 🩵

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User Profile: Amanda84
Amanda84 June 2nd

@7Bear7

Thank you for sharing 💙

Always appreciate your poems!

I hope you are good my friend 💚🤗

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User Profile: 7Bear7
7Bear7 OP June 5th

@Amanda84

You are welcome, and thank you for reading. 

I posted two including this one the other night.

I uh I'm eh, been having some difficult and bad days, but luckily most of those days have some good to great moment sprinkled throughout, and the occasionally good day too. So over all kinda eh but not horrible which is good I think lol

Thank you for being here Amanda, have a blessed day 

🩵

User Profile: Amanda84
Amanda84 June 5th

@7Bear7

A pleasure 💚 

I genuinely hope the good days outweigh the bad 🩷 

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