CAPTAIN OF MY SOUL
Out of the night that covers me, Black as the pit from pole to pole,
I thank where ever the Gods may be For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance, I have not winced or cried out aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance, My head is *** but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath or tears, Looms but the horror of the shade.
And yet the menace of the years finds me, and shall find me unafraid.
It matters not how straight the gate, how charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul.
@wIthpeACE
oh this is soooo good. the last line is the stuff of icons.
@Heather225
Thanks it means alot!!😄
@wIthpeACE
i love you’re writing style!! you’re brilliant keep it up <3
@iloveyouxx
Thank you.😊Please keep supporting!! I can't ask for more.
@wIthpeACE
ofcourse🩷!
@iloveyouxx
Actually this is a poem by William Ernest Henley. 🧐He's quite famous for this poem. I wanted to share it as my first post because I drew inspiration from this poem, which ultimately led me here. Next time i'll post one of mine and would love to get support too!!😁
@wIthpeACE
ooh I don’t think I know him :0 that makes sense🤍and I’d love to read one of your poems!! :D
@iloveyouxx
I did post one a few hours ago. Mind checking it out?
@wIthpeACE
oh I didn’t see that one :0 ofc I will right now
@wIthpeACE Very nice. Your piece is melodic, emotional without seeming dramatic, and uplifting. It feels as if you spent significant time choosing just the right combinations of words and imagery to provide maximum effect. I liked it very much and look forward to seeing more of your submissions.
@BastionKnight
Thanks!! Your encouragement means a lot!!😄