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Keeping Quiet

User Profile: LiveandLearn15
LiveandLearn15 May 8th, 2025

"Keeping Quiet" by Pablo Neruda


Now we will count to twelve
and we will all keep still.

For once on the face of the earth
let's not speak in any language,
let's stop for one second,
and not move our arms so much.

It would be an exotic moment
without rush, without engines,
we would all be together
in a sudden strangeness.

Fishermen in the cold sea
would not harm whales
and the man gathering salt
would not look at his hurt hands.

Those who prepare wars,
wars with gas, wars with fire,
victory with no survivors,
would put on clean clothes
and walk about with their brothers
in the shade, doing nothing.

What I want should not be confused
with total inactivity.
Life is what it is about

If we were not so single-minded
about keeping our lives moving,
and for once could do nothing,
perhaps a huge silence
might interrupt this sadness
of never understanding ourselves
and of threatening ourselves with death.
Perhaps the earth can teach us
as when everything seems dead
and later proves to be alive.

Now I'll count up to twelve
and you keep quiet and I will go.

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User Profile: Tinywhisper11
Tinywhisper11 May 8th, 2025

@LiveandLearn15 that's an amazing poem 👏👏 reminded me of John lennons song 'imagine' and Garth Brooks song 'we shall be free' 💖 if only your poem could come true, just for that 12 seconds maybe hope would live once more💖💖 thank you for sharing your poem

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User Profile: LiveandLearn15
LiveandLearn15 OP May 8th, 2025

@Tinywhisper11

Thank you. Pablo Neruda is my favorite poet but I never heard this one until last night

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User Profile: Tinywhisper11
Tinywhisper11 May 8th, 2025

@LiveandLearn15 it's a very powerful poem 💖

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