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The quiet echo

User Profile: honestKiwi8724
honestKiwi8724 September 10th, 2025

I stand before the mirror, eyes so wide,

A reflection I wish I could hide.

Doubt whispers softly in my ear,

Telling me I’m never enough, never clear.

My heart beats fast with every word I speak,

Fearing the silence, fearing the leaks.

The cracks in my soul that no one can see,

They whisper of flaws that only I believe.

I search for answers, for signs that I’m whole,

But deep inside, there’s a void in my soul.

I ask for validation, hoping for peace,

But the answers I seek seem never to cease.

In the crowd, I feel unseen,

Like a shadow that’s lost, but never too keen.

My worth feels like a question, a constant fight,

In the silence, I wonder if I’m wrong or right.

Yet behind all the doubt, there’s a light that glows,

A beauty within that only I know.

I’m learning to see through the fog and the fear,

To embrace my worth, even when it’s unclear.

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User Profile: Amanda84
Amanda84 September 10th, 2025

@honestKiwi8724

So poignantly beautiful.

The inner doubts versus the desire to hope, to try, yo look in that mirror and be happy.

The frailty of being human.

The insecurities we all face.

The battle towards acceptance!

A battle that we must never give up on.

Well written.

Thank you for sharing!

💜💕

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User Profile: honestKiwi8724
honestKiwi8724 OP September 10th, 2025

Glad you can relate to it and thx i tried my best!!!

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User Profile: SRA45
SRA45 September 10th, 2025

@honestKiwi8724 Beautiful pened the internal struggle. Mirror never lies it's just reflect , Believe in your self 

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User Profile: honestKiwi8724
honestKiwi8724 OP September 10th, 2025

@Bestwillow45 thanks means aot i will keep posting if you like my poems 

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User Profile: SRA45
SRA45 September 10th, 2025

@honestKiwi8724 Don't do it for me or anyone else Do it for your self.

U r a soul experiencing life and your poems are expression of life

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User Profile: honestKiwi8724
honestKiwi8724 OP September 10th, 2025

Thank you so much ð«¶

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User Profile: sincerePineapple2070
sincerePineapple2070 September 11th, 2025

@honestKiwi8724

A lion-hearted write, as a dopamine of inspiration

Let me share two lines of an anonymous but great monk of our land-

My shadow cannot, frighten me

I was, I am, I will be.