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White Rose

User Profile: bobaTeaa1234
bobaTeaa1234 December 29th, 2025

When I first met you

You were a rose

A white one in fact

So pure, perfect, and true 


The longer I held you in my hands

The more I noticed the thorns

Which have pricked my fingers

The blood was red and dark


Before I knew it 

It has gotten on the rose

The rose wasn't pure anymore

It wasn't perfect


It was terrifying

It was now dangerous

This rose has hurt me


And if only I wasn't 

Blinded by its beauty

Maybe then I would've noticed

The thorns that scar my hands

If only I had noticed



Just wrote this poem rn but had the idea about it for a while. What do you guys think? Is it good? Any advice?

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User Profile: Amanda84
Amanda84 December 29th, 2025

@bobaTeaa1234

I liked it.

It's raw.

Flowing.

Honest.

From the heart.

Speaks to many people 💚😊