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A few drops of ink

User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes April 22nd, 2024

*feels nervous*

So I wrote this (TW for mentions of pain, tears, vague mentions [i think] to unaliving andd thats it i think)

I could write a thousand poems
On how it hurts, deep inside
Sing a hundred songs
Of all the pain, the world has to hide
I could talk of broken homes,
Hum tunes of dying hearts
Walk through fallen stones
And memories, torn apart
And someone, somewhere, deep in tears
Will still have no one to drive away their fears
And someone, somewhere, in darkness still
Will be filled with growing holes, somehow drilled
And we can give a minute, an hour, a day of remembrance
But pain has an ever lasting fragrance
No poet could write
The depths that this earth
Has held, with its love,
Of pain and of hurt
But maybe a few words,
A few drops of ink
Can show someone, somewhere
Their ship need not sink
Their hearts can keep beating
Their soulds need not set aside
Hope may be fleating
But compassion is by their side
As long as eyes can blink
And hurts can hurt,
As long as they can think
They need not lie deep in the dirt
So accept my few drops of ink
And know I care, for what its worth

Its probably dramatic 😭

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User Profile: BelovedMe
BelovedMe April 23rd, 2024

@unassumingEyes•••The depth of your words filled with wisdom and truth of nature 🌿🍃 of life, earth, pain 😢 was highly thought provoking, believe me it's really very very blissful to hear with a touch of pain and truth you given🙂keep writing 📝you got a fan 😌

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP April 23rd, 2024

@BelovedMe thank you so much for your kind words 🩷 it took some courage to post it xD but i will try to keep posting and writing and creating 🩷

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User Profile: LoveMyMoonflowers
LoveMyMoonflowers April 23rd, 2024

@unassumingEyes 

*hugs eyes buddy if okay* this is beautiful 💜 thank you for sharing this with us. 💜 i think you really have a way with words eyes friend (: keep writing 💕 

- flowers :') 

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP April 23rd, 2024

@LoveMyMoonflowers *hugs* thank you 🥹🩷 ill try to get the courage to post some more <3

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User Profile: LoveMyMoonflowers
LoveMyMoonflowers April 24th, 2024

@unassumingEyes

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User Profile: Moonlightsonata00sss0
Moonlightsonata00sss0 April 23rd, 2024

@unassumingEyes wowww. Im speechless. U are so talented I mean ur words are so deep and beautiful. Thank u for sharing ❤️

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP April 23rd, 2024

@Moonlightsonata00sss0 thank you for the kind words 🩷 im glad you liked it 🤍

User Profile: LoveMyMoonflowers
LoveMyMoonflowers April 24th, 2024

@Moonlightsonata00sss0

I agree 🥰

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP April 27th, 2024

No pressure to read or reply but from a poet to a poet (that makes me sound o l d) i thought i should share @iloveyouxx

User Profile: Tinywhisper11
Tinywhisper11 April 27th, 2024

@unassumingEyes awww that was a beautiful poem ❤❤ your words flow with such depth and emotion ❤❤ it's a sad poem 😢 but yes never loose hope, everything has a funny way of turning out ok ❤❤ your a very talented writer ❤ great job ❤

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP April 27th, 2024

@Tinywhisper11 Thank you ❤️

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User Profile: David57
David57 May 4th, 2024

@unassumingEyes

Poetry is meant to be dramatic. I loved it.

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP May 4th, 2024

@David57 Thank you ❤️

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User Profile: modestundue
modestundue May 9th, 2024

@unassumingEyes why is there a trigger warning for tears

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User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes OP May 10th, 2024

@modestundue Idk 😁 just incase 🤷‍♀️ 

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User Profile: David57
David57 May 9th, 2024

It’s probably very thought provoking too! Thank you