Please do comment about my new Poem..
AriaLilMoon1109
October 3rd, 2023
This is a poem which tells us about a city with silent streets and the city where no one meets. It's called "THE CITY UNKNOWN"
In the city's heart, a vacant scene,
No footsteps heard, no voices keen.
Buildings stand tall, devoid of life,
A silent symphony, absence rife.
Empty streets, once bustling with sound,
Now echoes of solitude, all around.
A city's pulse, now faintly beating,
In the absence of souls, retreating.
Yet in the stillness, a quiet grace,
An opportunity to find a different pace.
The city breathes, takes a moment's rest,
Awaiting the return of its vibrant zest.
For when life awakens and fills the air,
The city will thrive, beyond compare.
But for now, it lingers in tranquil repose,
A city with no one, yet hope still grows.
No footsteps heard, no voices keen.
Buildings stand tall, devoid of life,
A silent symphony, absence rife.
Empty streets, once bustling with sound,
Now echoes of solitude, all around.
A city's pulse, now faintly beating,
In the absence of souls, retreating.
Yet in the stillness, a quiet grace,
An opportunity to find a different pace.
The city breathes, takes a moment's rest,
Awaiting the return of its vibrant zest.
For when life awakens and fills the air,
The city will thrive, beyond compare.
But for now, it lingers in tranquil repose,
A city with no one, yet hope still grows.
ZendagiMigzaraaa
October 3rd, 2023
@AriaLilMoon1109
Wow Amazing!!😮 Beautifully written💛💛
1 reply
@ZendagiMigzaraaa Thank you!! :)
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LoveMyMoonflowers
October 3rd, 2023
@AriaLilMoon1109
I really enjoyed reading this poem! 💙
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@LoveMyMoonflowers I am glad to hear that!! :)
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G2foru
October 4th, 2023
@AriaLilMoon1109 wow..it's simply beautiful 😍
