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Void Wish

User Profile: determinedSea4370
determinedSea4370 January 12th, 2025

A teenage girl groaned

under the weight of socialized expectations-

wanting an expanse of silence

just for herself.

The parties and playdates spun merry-go-rounds

around her weekends

and so she reached for a golden ring-

childhood tumbling off a cliff edge.

A void that she had asked for.


Now the woman is silky wrapped

in cold sheets

in the embrace of a lonely hangover-

of days spent singing

and screaming

trying to fill an empty house.


And now

she decorates her void

with little blue screens.

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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight January 13th, 2025

@determinedSea4370

Poignant, beautiful, and lonely. It feels like a very moving description of the transition from the heady carefree days of youth, and the dreams of such times, to the bleaker and harsher realities of growing up. As melancholic as it's themes seem to be, i could not help but be enthralled by the images of the last two lines "She decorates her void with little blue screens". Love it!

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User Profile: determinedSea4370
determinedSea4370 OP January 13th, 2025

@BastionKnight Thank you!

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