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WINGS

User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE October 22nd, 2024

Under the moonlight-

My heart sings.

My spirit dances.

And my soul gains wings...

The pressure weighs less.

My mind is at ease.

The rhythm takes over.

All the burdens cease...


But it only lasts so long;

It seems 'freedom' and 'trust' live smaller each time.

I have yet to feel the wind in my wings;

When you put me in a cage, yet you commit no crime.

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond October 22nd, 2024

@wIthpeACE Beautiful poem!.. Especially those  last two lines are soul stirring 

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User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE OP October 22nd, 2024

@azurePond

Thank youuu!😊

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User Profile: iloveyouxx
iloveyouxx October 22nd, 2024

@wIthpeACE

i love this poem too!! the imagery of freedom and being trapped is really powerful. I love how the moonlight brings peace, but that peace is only temporary, with freedom and trust shrinking over time. the paradox at the end-feeling caged without anyone to blame.. that really hit hard :’) It’s such a thought provoking piece! great job!! <3🩷

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User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE OP October 22nd, 2024

@iloveyouxx

Really?!! THANKS. 😊 Glad someone like my style.

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