Why are you sad?
There is an unexplained sadness in your eyes,
perhaps you aren't satisfied with life.
You can't pinpoint the source of your misery,
but you can feel it.
There is some poetic beauty to it,
the temporary one ruffled over his impermanence.
@BlatantHonesty
Very well written and something worth paying attention to.
@BlatantHonesty
You're a very deep and fine writer of many human things. Can I ask what's your age?
@Helgafy
old enough lol
@BlatantHonesty
That's very funny. Because of all your philosophic writing you're not a young chicken. And that's fine! I'm a 72 year old Christian woman living alone in Bergen on the west coast of Norway. I have no children. Ups - why am I telling you? I have already found some interesting words in your writing - God, de ath, accept, detached. You're living as far from my country as you can live; you live 12 hours before us. LOL.