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@edmurWill

Here's a poem I wrote for my Father's birthday:

Wishing You, A Great Birthday,

Cuz You're, A Special Dad!

Hope That It's, The VERY best,

The BEST, You've EVER had!

I'm Sending You, This Birthday wish,

And Hope, Your Day Is FUN!

Cuz When, It comes, To Special Dads,

Dad! You're Number 1 ! ! !

@edmurWill

Here is a updated version of poem I created
using an online tool last year.

It's just cyber-wordplay for fun
so need to read anything into it.

Title:
A 7cup Land State of Mind
(The Stress Hip Hop Poem)

Yeah, yeah

Ayo, listeners, it's time.

It's time, listeners
(listeners, let's begin!)

Straight out the helpful dungeons of rap.

The feeling drops deep as does my emotion.

I never talk, 'cause to talk is the source of my commotion.

Beyond the walls of listeners, life is defined.

I think of vent, when in a 7cup land state of mind.

Hope your commotion got some promotion.

My ocean don't like no angry emotion.

Run it up to the notion and get the true devotion.

In a 7cup land state of mind. Yeah.

What more could you ask for? The real caring feeling?

You complain about lonely.

I gotta love it - someone still speaks for the healing.

I'm rappin' to the stress,

And I'm gonna move your online access.

Attentive, compassionate, understanding, like an anxiety

Yo, member, you gotta follow the propriety.

I can't take the lonely, can't take the worry.

I woulda tried to chat I guess I got no hurry.

I'm rappin' to the access,

And I'm gonna move your stress.

Yea, yaz, in a 7cup land state of mind.

Thinking of vent. Yaz, thinking of vent (vent).

Miss you
Miss being happy & calm
Miss being around your arms
Every day, Every hour, Every now and then.

I wish you come here and lift my soul
Without you, I am just a goldfish in an empty bowl
Simply trying to escape this lonesome misery
The warmth of your body will end my dank shivery
I know it's over for you and I am a forgotten memory
Someone who you loved and will always love truly
But you are through for protecting me and protecting us
And I respect your decision for boarding on a one-way bus
Go on, be safe & sound
As I am walking back to the burial mound
What matters the most
The first time our eyes met & the way we stared
The time we spent and thoughts we shared
Go on, don't look back.
Just go on.

Edmur
Goodbye blue sky.

@edmurWill

i know we’re sharing poems but here is a preview of a story I wrote

She brushed her crimson hair out of her face. The pencil-like trees danced in the wind, and she danced with them.

She danced in the wind every day. Every morning, when the big, orange circle floated up in the sky, she danced. When the moon sat and gazed out at the countryside, she danced.

Her life was traumatic. But when she danced, the worries floated away, all the way to heaven.

And when the night came to an end, she looked up at the honeysuckle tree and told it, “I will be back tomorrow.”

and here’s a poem too. You read it diagonally but you can also read it each column

Dear Self,

I am sorry that

I let you down

My mind shut down

I was unaware of this world

The world’s consequences

Even just a small change of pace

Can be life altering

Can create a mournful mind

I wish I had not neglected my dreams

I never intended to quit

But when I did

I was cursed with tragedy

I ended up in the wretched woods

And I was all alone

In a place I never hankered to reside in

In a punishable, problematic world

Lost in my life-cracking consequences

No way out

My mentality overcame my soul

I was stagnant to live my life

I died in my mind

I suffered all the time

It felt like

I was put to sleep by the *** of a spindle

My soul was cursed by my mind

And I was never to wake again

@edmurWill

Nice flow of thoughts and feelings! ❤️