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My only poem...🍃🤍

User Profile: raspberryBunny4662
raspberryBunny4662 November 17th, 2025

People who write or read poetry often, how is this poem? This was my first and last poem, wrote it six months ago, maybe... What do you think of it? Cause I have no idea 🤔:

  ~Your eyes, your eyes, your eyes;  

‎They aren't blue oceans or crystal skies.  

‎They're golden, they're hazel, they're brown;  

‎Call it whatever you want.  

‎I would be the one to drown;  

‎For when I close my eyes, they'll always haunt.  


~  Your hair, your hair, your hair;  

‎It's so beautiful, it's unfair.  ‎  

‎It's not whites, or browns or reds;  

‎It's black and straight and long.  

‎I wanna run my fingers through them like threads;  

‎Not doing so feels wrong.  


~  Your smile, your smile, your smile;  

‎Let me admire it for a while.  

‎It's barely there and sweet;  

‎Such goes down my craze,  

‎It's the soft breeze in the heat;  

‎And it leaves me in a haze.  


‎~  Your voice, your voice, your voice;  

‎My mind traces it between the noise.  ‎  

‎It's like a song in my ear,  

‎And if I don't get to hear;  

‎My day won't be whole, I fear.  

‎So I try to keep it near.  


~  Your hands, your hands, your hands,  

‎Wish they were my waist's friends.  ‎  

‎Soft and gentle like a flower,  

‎Long and delicate fingers...  

‎If they meet my skin in the shower?  

‎I wonder how long the touch lingers.  


‎~  Your name, your name, your name,  

‎I can't say it out loud, such a shame.  ‎  

‎But no worries, I'll do it someday;  

‎So now remains what's to say.  


‎~ Your heart, your heart, your heart;  

‎Mine beats for it from the start.    

‎With butterflies in me,  

‎I wonder if you'd be my lover;  

‎Either way it'd be,  

‎Sorry to break it to you, the poem is over... 

🖤💙🤍

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 17th, 2025

@raspberrybunny4662

Don't know how these texts work yet, still learning, lol 👀

User Profile: Amanda84
Amanda84 November 17th, 2025

@raspberryBunny4662

I really enjoyed reading your poem.

A true love poem

The beauty captured in the lines.

The individuality.

The personality.

The quiet tones pervading through it.

💕💜

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 17th, 2025

@Amanda84

Awww, thank YOU for saying so ❤❤❤

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Amanda84 November 17th, 2025

@raspberryBunny4662

A pleasure 💜 

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Xaiyaa5 November 17th, 2025

This is a beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it.

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@Xaiyaa5

Thanks 💚

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Xaiyaa5 November 17th, 2025

This is a beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it.

User Profile: PatienceImpatiens
PatienceImpatiens November 17th, 2025

What a lovely Love Poem.

I think you’ve “got it.” (the gift)

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@Patiencelmpatiens

Thank you 💙

Ooo... Maybe 🙃 orrr maybe just got a good idea back then... It was fun, though. So glad you liked it ✨

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User Profile: placidScarf4792
placidScarf4792 November 18th, 2025

Beautifullllll

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@placidScarf4792

Thanks 💖

I was a bit hesitant about the poem itself, I'm 15, I don't know if it's too bold 😅😶

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placidScarf4792 November 18th, 2025

No no its spectacularr

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

Ah, I suppose 😃 Thanks 🤍🤍🤍

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User Profile: placidScarf4792
placidScarf4792 November 18th, 2025

The hands part felt bold but it doesnt mean its bad.

Your poetry is beautiful. Doesnt matter with the age 🫶💗

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

Yeah, probably. I was just overthinking it, I guess 😅

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placidScarf4792 November 18th, 2025

Also, were you weirded out when i said i was scared of anonymous friends. Cause i replied to u again and u didnt reply. So i was wondering if i made u uncomfy lol.

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

What? Where? Oh, in my "Anyone to talk to" post? No, actually I got a notification about a new post, but there were so many old messages gathering there from everyone, I couldn't find any new at all, I don't even know you replied to me 😅 I'm not weirded out by anything, don't worry 💖💖 I'll go look for it later...

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placidScarf4792 November 18th, 2025

Oh okay then im glad. 💗

I thought it weirded you out or you felt awkward so you didnt reply.

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

Not at all ❤️

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User Profile: TovaCares76
TovaCares76 November 18th, 2025

@raspberryBunny4662

I loved your poem. I liked the subjects of affection, and the different feelings you expressed about them. It's a lovely poem, and if you wrote it about someone you know, they're very lucky to be the inspiration. 

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@SelfCareMatters

Thank you ❤️🤍💟

It was inspired from a fictional character I have a crush on 😆

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vids246 November 18th, 2025

@raspberryBunny4662 I so love it!! brought a big smile on my face, thanks so much for sharing it!!💚

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@vids246 Glad you liked it! 😁 ❤️

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toughSail5697 November 18th, 2025

@gpberryBunny4662 start a chat with me?

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@toughSail5697 

Sure!!! Members can't chat with eachother on 7cups, though, and I'm not sure how a listner can  start a chat with a member if you are one, cause I'm not... And I don't use any socials, either. 

We can surely talk here, tho, if you want. Or, I can create a separate thread for us and tag you there so you get a notification? Let me know what you prefer ❤

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User Profile: SimplyCompassionate
SimplyCompassionate November 18th, 2025

@raspberryBunny4662

Beautiful poem, I loved it ð¤©

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raspberryBunny4662 OP November 18th, 2025

@SimplyCompassionate

Thanks 🦋

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