My only poem...🍃🤍
People who write or read poetry often, how is this poem? This was my first and last poem, wrote it six months ago, maybe... What do you think of it? Cause I have no idea 🤔:
~Your eyes, your eyes, your eyes;
They aren't blue oceans or crystal skies.
They're golden, they're hazel, they're brown;
Call it whatever you want.
I would be the one to drown;
For when I close my eyes, they'll always haunt.
~ Your hair, your hair, your hair;
It's so beautiful, it's unfair.
It's not whites, or browns or reds;
It's black and straight and long.
I wanna run my fingers through them like threads;
Not doing so feels wrong.
~ Your smile, your smile, your smile;
Let me admire it for a while.
It's barely there and sweet;
Such goes down my craze,
It's the soft breeze in the heat;
And it leaves me in a haze.
~ Your voice, your voice, your voice;
My mind traces it between the noise.
It's like a song in my ear,
And if I don't get to hear;
My day won't be whole, I fear.
So I try to keep it near.
~ Your hands, your hands, your hands,
Wish they were my waist's friends.
Soft and gentle like a flower,
Long and delicate fingers...
If they meet my skin in the shower?
I wonder how long the touch lingers.
~ Your name, your name, your name,
I can't say it out loud, such a shame.
But no worries, I'll do it someday;
So now remains what's to say.
~ Your heart, your heart, your heart;
Mine beats for it from the start.
With butterflies in me,
I wonder if you'd be my lover;
Either way it'd be,
Sorry to break it to you, the poem is over...
🖤💙🤍
@raspberryBunny4662
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
A true love poem
The beauty captured in the lines.
The individuality.
The personality.
The quiet tones pervading through it.
💕💜

@Amanda84
Awww, thank YOU for saying so ❤❤❤
@raspberryBunny4662
A pleasure 💜
This is a beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it.
Beautifullllll
@placidScarf4792
Thanks 💖
I was a bit hesitant about the poem itself, I'm 15, I don't know if it's too bold 😅😶
The hands part felt bold but it doesnt mean its bad.
Your poetry is beautiful. Doesnt matter with the age 🫶💗
Yeah, probably. I was just overthinking it, I guess 😅
Also, were you weirded out when i said i was scared of anonymous friends. Cause i replied to u again and u didnt reply. So i was wondering if i made u uncomfy lol.
What? Where? Oh, in my "Anyone to talk to" post? No, actually I got a notification about a new post, but there were so many old messages gathering there from everyone, I couldn't find any new at all, I don't even know you replied to me 😅 I'm not weirded out by anything, don't worry 💖💖 I'll go look for it later...
@raspberryBunny4662
I loved your poem. I liked the subjects of affection, and the different feelings you expressed about them. It's a lovely poem, and if you wrote it about someone you know, they're very lucky to be the inspiration.
@gpberryBunny4662 start a chat with me?
@toughSail5697
Sure!!! Members can't chat with eachother on 7cups, though, and I'm not sure how a listner can start a chat with a member if you are one, cause I'm not... And I don't use any socials, either.
We can surely talk here, tho, if you want. Or, I can create a separate thread for us and tag you there so you get a notification? Let me know what you prefer ❤