Found this old poem by myself while organizing my files
The traveller presses his folded clothes
Into the bright red travelling bag,
Over the laughter and banter,
As friends race to see who's the fastest
In finishing the pack up.
The traveller looks outside the window
At the countless stars glittering,
Some of them decorated in constellations,
Some of them streaked like a galaxy,
Scattered throughout the bluish black night sky.
The traveller sets out for the long journey
The next morning with his friends,
Plump bags slung over their shoulders,
Filled with ambition and youthful energy,
Trekking on the uncharted journey.
Eight years and many losses later,
On a cold dark night filled with silence,
The traveller reaches the destination,
With his faded torn travelling bag,
With scars on his limbs and without company.
The exhausted traveller lays down on the
Hard ground and looks up at the dull black night sky
Empty except for a lone white star,
And reflected on the hardships
He had gone through on the long journey.
The traveller comes to a realization
That he was the only one in the group
Who had learned from those hardships,
While others had ignored the fruit of lessons
Waiting to be devoured.
That long journey, the traveller mused,
Is, of course, called- Life.
🔆@charmingFlower8111,
This is such a wonderful poem 💓 thank you for sharing it with us ☺️. Well written with beautiful depths🌝 .

@SilverMistakes
Thank you for lovely words!
@charmingFlower8111 Wow, thank you for sharing your poem with us. That was so deep, touching, sad, yet beautiful. Amazing job. You are so talented. ♡
@YourCaringConfidant
Thank you caring! It was written a couple of years ago, when I was undergoing a tough time 🙂
@charmingFlower8111 Hey, sometimes we write our best masterpieces when we are going through the journey of life like the traveler. I bet you still wrote poems just as deep and beautiful. ♡
@charmingFlower8111
Wow, this is great! Beautifully written, at turns exciting, sad, reflective, and thought-provoking. Each perfect descriptor is like a pebble in a zen garden, it's tightly written and I LOVE that it tells an interesting story. Awesome!
@ThadSterling
Thank you for your beautiful and descriptive words! 😊
I wanted to tell the concept of life, that in the end, we all will have to walk our own path... through this poem 🙂
As a poetry lover myself, I am absolutely in love with the story you showed through this poem and it’s words. keep up the amazing writing!
@charmingFlower8111 charming's poet too😮
@Fristo
Yeah, a budding 🌷 one too 😃