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Found this old poem by myself while organizing my files

February 15th, 2023

The traveller presses his folded clothes

Into the bright red travelling bag,

Over the laughter and banter,

As friends race to see who's the fastest

In finishing the pack up.


The traveller looks outside the window

At the countless stars glittering,

Some of them decorated in constellations,

Some of them streaked like a galaxy,

Scattered throughout the bluish black night sky.


The traveller sets out for the long journey

The next morning with his friends,

Plump bags slung over their shoulders,

Filled with ambition and youthful energy,

Trekking on the uncharted journey.


Eight years and many losses later,

On a cold dark night filled with silence,

The traveller reaches the destination,

With his faded torn travelling bag,

With scars on his limbs and without company.


The exhausted traveller lays down on the

Hard ground and looks up at the dull black night sky

Empty except for a lone white star,

And reflected on the hardships

He had gone through on the long journey.


The traveller comes to a realization

That he was the only one in the group

Who had learned from those hardships,

While others had ignored the fruit of lessons

Waiting to be devoured.


That long journey, the traveller mused,

Is, of course, called- Life.

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User Profile: SilverMistakes
SilverMistakes February 15th, 2023

🔆@charmingFlower8111,

This is such a wonderful poem 💓 thank you for sharing it with us ☺️. Well written with beautiful depths🌝 .

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February 15th, 2023

@SilverMistakes

Thank you for lovely words!

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User Profile: YourCaringConfidant
YourCaringConfidant February 15th, 2023

@charmingFlower8111 Wow, thank you for sharing your poem with us. That was so deep, touching, sad, yet beautiful. Amazing job. You are so talented. ♡

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February 15th, 2023

@YourCaringConfidant

Thank you caring! It was written a couple of years ago, when I was undergoing a tough time 🙂

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YourCaringConfidant February 15th, 2023

@charmingFlower8111 Hey, sometimes we write our best masterpieces when we are going through the journey of life like the traveler. I bet you still wrote poems just as deep and beautiful. ♡

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User Profile: ThadSterling
ThadSterling February 16th, 2023

@charmingFlower8111

Wow, this is great! Beautifully written, at turns exciting, sad, reflective, and thought-provoking. Each perfect descriptor is like a pebble in a zen garden, it's tightly written and I LOVE that it tells an interesting story. Awesome!

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February 16th, 2023

@ThadSterling

Thank you for your beautiful and descriptive words! 😊
I wanted to tell the concept of life, that in the end, we all will have to walk our own path... through this poem 🙂

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alexahelp5078 April 27th, 2023

As a poetry lover myself, I am absolutely in love with the story you showed through this poem and it’s words. keep up the amazing writing!

May 3rd, 2023

@charmingFlower8111 charming's poet too😮

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May 3rd, 2023

@Fristo

Yeah, a budding 🌷 one too 😃

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