The Bronze Boy and The Princess of Night
They forged him young in the hush of storms,
A bell of bronze with a royal form
Hung from the rafters of a roofless place,
He rang at the wind but not with grace
He swallowed the bell to silence the sound,
To keep the peace when none was around
So every tremble in the palace below
Struck a toll in his chest, too slow
He learned to bow like a dusk struck fern,
To curl at the lash that did not burn
He wore his blame like cathedral glass,
So holy they dared not let him pass
His anger was stitched into borrowed shoes,
Too big to run, too tight to lose
He’d walk on eggs not to crack the dawn,
But the yolk of grief still lingered on
They made him the ark for unspoken guilt,
A prince-shaped vault where the storms were built
Each broken promise—a rusted nail—
He bore their weight like a weathered sail
I met him one moonless night by a well of thread,
Spinning silence from things unsaid
He looked like thunder carved from bread—
Soft and furious, half-alive, half-dead
So I told him–
Let the bell out, boy of bronze,
You were never meant to chime their wrongs
You're not a lighthouse for their loss,
Nor a bridge they burn to walk across
Break the spell with a bite of fruit,
Let your tears water my weathered shoot
You can leave the palace with the flickering light—
The ghosts won’t follow you into the night
Be not the echo of someone’s fall—
Be the King who dares to hear his call
And if the bell still shakes your core,
May it ring for you—and own your roar.
At first, he paused—his eyes unsure,
A boy half-mortal, half demure
But bronze remembers heat, not warmth,
He nodded slow: “Meet me at the tower north.”
I helped him unhook the clappered grief,
With hands like ice and breath like thief
And when the bell rolled from his chest,
He wept. And said, “My mind finally rests”
He wore no crown but named his name
King of Bronze, with a royal claim
He rebuilt a hall of mirrors and flame,
And soon forgot from where he came
One day he raised his hand. The court grew still
His heart beats reverberating to their iron will
He cried “The bell was mine alone—
You broke my voice and cracked my throne”
He cast me down with cold decree,
“Let iron ropes taste her treachery
Let the bell remember what she tried to mold,
For she dared to bind me in an eternal hold”
The bell I’d freed was hoisted high
Into the north tower that scraped the sky
It tolled again—just once—for show,
But every echo rang below
And I—
I knew the sound was not for war,
Nor birth, nor loss, nor mythic lore
It tolled for me. I knew its rage—
The bronze I’d tamed and hoped to cage
They tied my wrists in linen thread,
The crowd below, the sky half-dead
The mask was not placed to hide my face,
A kindness in that final grace
And as I rose to meet the rope,
Without any pleas, without hope
The last thing in my line of sight
The boy I loved, now crowned in spite
His fingers twitched, as if to soothe
But he did not cry. He did not move.
And when I dropped—
@azurePond
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So much emotions and deep words the emotional impact is profound There's a sense of tragedy, betrayal, and a deep melancholy for a good intention gone horribly wrong. The ambiguous ending, leaving the Princess's fate to the reader's imagination, enhances the lingering sadness😯This is a very strong piece of poetry. It's rich in symbolism, has a compelling narrative, and evokes powerful emotions. The use of rhyme and rhythm is consistent but not overly rigid, allowing the story to flow naturally.
Well done azure👏🌟🌟🌟🌟
@Tulipsmile Ah, sorry Tulipsmile for the late reply!
But wow—thank you so much 🥹 Your words truly mean a lot.
I’m really grateful that you felt the emotional weight of it—the tragedy, the betrayal, the quiet ache beneath it all. Thank you for seeing it so deeply, and for reflecting it back with such warmth.
Truly—your comment is a gift 🫶
@azurePond 
@azurePond
He swallowed the bell to silence the sound made me cry 🥺 The way you write is so effectively honest, rooted in depth and clarity, it just speaks so freely and allows people in to your world. @cyanessence as another poet, I'd love to hear your input 💜
@Amanda84
@azurePond
I'm admittedly not great at interpreting poetry. I love poetry, but it's often quite mysterious to me. That being said, I really enjoyed this poem! You are a talented artist, azure.
It speaks to me of someone bearing burdens, and those burdens coming to define them. When you rip away someone's sense of identity, they can lash out. One may feel more free with their troubles as it provides a certain level of certainty, which is comforting. I sometimes miss my depression because I knew what my thoughts would be. In freedom from it, I have a lot more choice, and I feel a level of responsibility to participate in society. Am I on the mark at all? I'd like to know so I can get better at interpretation. I purposefully didn't read the other comments, so I had the opportunity to form my own opinion.
I really love the ending. I want to know the final thought!
Thanks for tagging me, Amanda. I'm glad I didn't miss this one.
@cyanessence
What I love about poetry is that there are no wrong interpretations — whatever you felt while reading it is valid. That said... you really did pick up on one of the core themes I was exploring: how some people start to find identity or safety in the burdens they carry.
Thank you for taking the time to engage so thoughtfully with the poem, and for appreciating it so deeply. You were never off the mark — in fact, you hit the bull's eye!
And thank you, @Amanda84, for tagging Cyanessence — I really appreciate it.
@azurePond you are welcome 💜
@azurePond
That is indeed the beauty of poetry. Whatever meaning one finds in it, is valid. I believe meaning-making is a human right, it should just not cause harm to others.
I'm so happy 7 Cups has a specific section for poetry. It truly helps me heal, and that's precisely what your poem achieved for me.
@cyanessence you are welcome, the beauty of poetry for me is that nobody's interpretation is the same 💜🥰
@cyanessence
That's a very interesting perspective, that you miss your depression in some ways because in a way, you knew where you were at and your thoughts were familiar, healing comes with its own set of problems that I never really considered before! 💜
