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Rising Phoenix (poem)

User Profile: WinterRose9
WinterRose9 August 10th, 2023

In the darkness I was always subsided

To tell the truth my mind was always full of quietness

You always told me that I would never last

You always just had to be so crass

I told you each time that I would give you a pass

Which is my fault along

i should have seen the lies behind the games of pong

You pushed me down more times that i could keep count of

When I looked you in the eye and told you it was the last time

You tried to hit my heart with another meaningless rhyme

The chains you once used to bind me lie naked on the floor

The remains of what was is nothing but ash nevermore

With a sacred chant I began to rise

Just a like phoenix my wings grew larger than ever before

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User Profile: innateJoy9602
innateJoy9602 August 10th, 2023

@PhoenixButterfly97

You have such a lovely way with words Phoenix!!

The last two lines are so beautifully written: "With a sacred chant I began to rise

Just a like phoenix my wings grew larger than ever before"

- When life gets you down, you can always rise back up stronger 💜

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User Profile: WinterRose9
WinterRose9 OP August 10th, 2023

Thank you!! 🥺❤️

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User Profile: innateJoy9602
innateJoy9602 August 10th, 2023

@PhoenixButterfly97

So talented! Thanks for sharing your poem with the community!

Hope to see more! (: 💜

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