Hey!
Hey everyone,
I am Nive and I'm 23 yrs old right now going through a bad phase in my life. I have written a poem about how I feel and if you guys have 2 mins, do give it a read.
Can't tell if I lost myself,or the road
Pinned against the wall, feeling deathly choked
Crying for help although I know Im alone...
Disarmed, I stand, losing the battle
Seeing my dreams and my future cripple
Tears rolled down, creating a puddle
Dont know what to do,how to handle
Not giving up, getting ready to fight
Against this world, against my foes
Once again lost the battle, hitting my lows
Lost my smile, cried through the night
@Spacegirl26
Hello Nive!
I love your name. I also really liked your poem. It’s filled with lots of emotion.
Hope you know you are not alone here. Life can be overwhelming. But, it helps to be around others who can relate to you. Welcome to the community <3💜
@innateJoy9602
Means a lot!! Thanks a ton!
@Spacegirl26
I can feel your pain and can definitely relate to you. You've beautifully written your emotions. Hope it gets better very very soon for you... 🌻
@ivoryFig1234
I hope u heal too!
@Spacegirl26
Thank you so much.. 🌻
Heyyy!
You can't lose your battles. You are getting better and better to fight them. I wouldn't wanna let that smile be off.
Best
@passionateHouse5556 Thank you!!
@Spacegirl26
Hi Nive
Thats a good start to your poem. I look forward to you adding to it with more positive stanzas as things improve for you. I am optimistic that they shall, hope you can be too.
TC 🐱
@1CaalmCat1 I surely will