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@SoulfullyAButterfly
These answers can get approval after the personal information (email, phone numbers are omitted) and focusing on key words of the question:
253490, 253491,253492, 253493, im sorry i dont remember the other one i did
@SoulfullyAButterfly
253499
To add more context to your answer:
Define trust
Avoid overemphasis words “really” and focus on making the tone a bit more professional
Use Google Scholar to type in key search terms to provide scope to your answer (e.g. trust; relationships) – see what comes up J Any qualitative or statistical information you want to include.
I can see there is an attempt at connection but please focus on sentence structure and what arguments you want to present.
Good attempt
253498
Your answer serves the right intention to provide an account from personalised experience. To frame your personal experience by not giving too much away state “Naturally research has shown this…”
Describe and explain as a topic sentence this: What is Borderline Personality Disorder and how it manifests?
Can lean more into the badness the individual sees in their borderline personality disorder – you can ask them an open-ended question. Compare the bad to the good and ask with curiosity.
I’m happy DBT has made a big difference in your life – now what you need to do find journal evidence or stats to back it up.
Think active listening skills to strengthen the answer.
Google Scholar is a good resource to use to find qualitative information on lived experiences and coping strategies for Borderline Personality.
Give it another shot, work on structure. J
253510
This answer leans too much into personal experience.
To answer the question what you can do is refrain from giving advice and frame the answer as more of an invitation to explore thoughts and feelings, ask open-ended questions.
Its about helping the individual to reflect.
What can help is using the key words (cheating, love) of the question to frame the answer and back it up with qualitative research.
Google Scholar is a good tool to use – since you are interested in spiritualism explore; spiritual perceptions of love or spirituality as a coping mechanism for unreciprocated love.
Please omit personal information – website link, name of the individual who helped you
253509
Exclude personal information, full names but do mention the name of the site where you’ve acquired the information
What this question is asking is to demonstrate active listening skills – so again use the key words in the question and invite reflection.
253501
Please put the key words of the question into your answer. Can you find research to back up the terminology you use “push and pull?”
I understand the intention to normalise that having feelings for someone you hate is normal.
You could base your answers around attachment theory which you can look up on google scholar.
You have a good idea of what you want to do, just focus on execution and how you want to lay out your answer.
Don’t forget to demonstrate the active listening skills – less abstract and more open please J
253500
What you can do here to provide a bit of contrast in answer and to help with layout out is either
A) State your personal experience briefly and then refer to the research (e.g. what was considered normality in relationships in the past and now)
B) State what the research is first and then briefly state your opinion
You make solid points and again encourage you to implement more active listening skills.
You can do this! J
253502
Good points – you use good similes and metaphors which adds a relatable touch.
Things to improve – A clearer topic sentence – what anxiety is?
- Researching topics (any themes within anxiety you want to explore – cognitive triad of negative thoughts, learning helplessness, why anxiety resembles symptoms of heart attack)
- Interview based research can be good to explore on google scholar to frame answer.
253503
Include research please to strength your answer.
253504
Include research please on perceptions of AI.
253505
Can you suggest any other tools and back it up with evidence please?
Its important to try to explore the underlying emotions and thoughts in the question.
253506
Can you suggest any other tools and back it up with evidence please?
Its important to try to explore the underlying emotions and thoughts in the question.
253507
Excellent time to reference the self-help guide on Sleeping Well on the 7 Cups site after you’ve shared you’re viewsJ
You can share your views but back it up with evidence.
Priority is to show active listening skills in Q and A content.
253508
First highlight the thoughts and feelings behind the question asked.
Please reference Plato quote – where did you get the content from? J
You can explore various themes here – stick to one and try to explain it backed up with evidence.
@SoulfullyAButterfly
253511
It would be a good idea to support your answer with journal research or research from an article.
Avoid using contractions in the answer as we want to encourage invitation for the person to reflect on their thoughts and feelings – omit the words “don’t” and “doesn’t.”
You mention good themes and just need to work on the clearer structure of your answer:
What is your topic sentence?
How will you back this up with research?
Are different points explained in one sentence – this can make the structure confused.
You can start by exploring thematic perceptions of on and off relationships?
You can explore the journal article here and apply it to strengthen your answer
A qualitative analysis of on-again/off-again romantic relationships: “It’s up and down, all around -
Try your best to use active listening skills into your answer (empathy, paraphrasing, professionalism and open ended questions) where needed.
Give it your best! J
253512
To make the answer stronger pick a theme and relate it to the perceptions of relationship and age.
It could be:
Culture
Religion
Then you can briefly link your perception and back it up with research.
Reference the 7 cups resource at the end 7cups.com/BrowseListeners inviting the individual to seek support through 1-1 confidential chat.
You can also mention the Relationship Support room where the individual can seek emotional support in group based chat and hear from others experiences too; feeling part of a community. J
253513
A topic sentence on what mental health is to provide context and a link to the question first. Find research. J
Can you find evidence on the effectiveness of Lopa Connect? Google scholar can help with this – what research is out there? J
Include the link to 7 cups to find a listener online for 1-1 support to explore thoughts and feelings further.
253514
Can you find research on the definition of depression you’ve choose please?
J
You touch on some important themes of depression – masking and people being unaware of your emotional state and feeling neglecting in the experience.
To make it simple to answer the question you can look at whichever guideline (American Psychological Society or British Psychological Society on how Depression is defined) to fully flesh out your answer. Specifically look at the symptomology to draw out more specific words and explain them – e.g. Irritability. Lack of interest in things you used to enjoy.
Qualitative research and case studies is best bet to draw out personalised experiences.
Good start – well done. Keep going.
253515
I liked that you repeated the question as that creates the impact and set the tone towards how you will answer. J
Focus on asking open ended questions:
What is it about them that you miss?
What emotions thoughts and feelings are coming up in their question?
How do they view relationships?
You give reasonable suggestions but need to provide more context to the answer through research evidence – could you link your answer towards learned helplessness theory?
253516
Balance your answer with personal experience coupled with active listening skills
What emotions, thoughts and feelings are coming through in their questioning?
Can you signpost any specialist links for support on the 7 cups site?