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A poem I made about the lost childhood and finding love again

User Profile: amicableTortoise8718
amicableTortoise8718 May 25th, 2024

Just this morning after more traumatic healin, I realized the absence of love is hate and that hate is all around us, within ourselves and breeds from some of our parents and our childhood.


All the love was wasted 

In a dreamland 


All the peace was destroyed 

In a dreamland


All the hope was gone

In a dreamland


All the hate was an endless buffet

All the pain fueled this world

All the fear screamed our names


Leave it all behind

The burden of hate

Leave the world of the dreamland


Dreamland was the childhood

That was a dream of luminating laughter and warmth


Love is the absence of hate


When hate is the only thing we know 

Love cease to exist


Give up the weapon 

Give up the war 

Cease the firing rage


Return to the nature 

Return to self


Living the space of reality 

Giving some room

So love can grow 


Let me know your thoughts. Love ❤️

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User Profile: Tinywhisper11
Tinywhisper11 May 25th, 2024

@amicableTortoise8718 I felt everyword as if it were speaking about me ❤ beautifully written, beautiful message ❤ no matter what don't let hate win.

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amicableTortoise8718 OP May 25th, 2024

@tinywhisper11 Thank you. That’s so sweet to hear 👂.

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Tinywhisper11 May 26th, 2024

@amicableTortoise8718 ❤❤

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communicativePond1728 July 9th, 2024

@amicableTortoise8718 It calmed/grounded me. 👍🏽

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amicableTortoise8718 OP July 10th, 2024

ð¥°ð¥° thank you

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sweetLight8474 July 10th, 2024

@amicableTortoise8718 Living the space of reality is the deal here❤

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amicableTortoise8718 OP July 21st, 2024

So true.

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