Poem
gregariousGrapefruit7800
April 18th, 2025
That broken place she went to as a little girl
Now shimmers before her once again
Not a mirage
Just a haunting
She is somewhere else now
Numb to the touch
She can’t hear you. She can’t see you.
She is a ghost.
azurePond
May 1st, 2025
@gregariousGrapefruit7800 The idea of being "numb to the touch" and "a ghost" speaks volumes about the struggle of feeling lost within oneself. Your words make me want to reach out, to pull her back from that haunting place, but I know sometimes it's not that simple. Beautifully written and deeply moving poem, Gregarious Grape Fruit!
ardentiana
May 5th, 2025
@gregariousGrapefruit7800 that's a really deep peom....I find multiple meanings in it like domestic violence or a place where she cried always when she was broken.....either way it's touching💕
