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Say your most heart touching poems here!💜 (can be created or can be of any author)

User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 August 22nd, 2022

Hello there everyone!

I am creating this forum for some :

Poem lovers , Writing lovers and for everyone else !

We all have some poems which make a deep spaces in our heart and they remain in our heart for a long time

Here's mine ( what I have wrote )

Race of exam

Things are changing all day long

Days are passing non stop

Feels like everything passing so fast.....

And can't catch it all up


Feels like I am behind in the race

Feels like everyone pushes me back

But I am going on little slow but trying to catch all up.....


I try to catch them u they run again...

Maybe..my attempts aren't good

Maybe...this mind doesn't want that happen ,


I am agai n all behind...bit this time stressed

And getting slower again...

My Freinds will win this race,

What about me ? How will I face???


But all thinking of that my mind suddenly thought something..

Enough !We would compete !!

With full of motivation I came back to study..

Tried very hard ut again failed...


But this time... I didn't got slower

Instead I got bit faster than before

Cause this time ,

Thoughts were positive

wasn't letting me back like before ....


And soon one day will come ..

And everyone watch

How strongly I completed my Race of Exam.


Than u for reading .



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User Profile: Sunisshiningandsoareyou
Sunisshiningandsoareyou August 22nd, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Navyyy, long time, how have you been? 💜 *shares cookies*

You are such a creative person, I feel the emotions you tried expressing/ conveying through the poem. Fear of lagging and being behind in the race is so valid, something more or less everyone experiences, I wish it wasn't a race to compete against others :/ that surely adds unnecessary stress. I believe in you, you amazing human, you try hard and it does matter. 💜 Thankyou for sharing your poem and making this space for everyone else to share also.

User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 25th, 2022

@Sunisshiningandsoareyou

Thank you so muucchh for reading my poem (I'm glad atleast someone thought to see it)

And yeah haven't been online lately so yeah days were quite upsetting but now everything is fine have came back

Glad to be back tho

*huugggs and offer cookies*

User Profile: Sunisshiningandsoareyou
Sunisshiningandsoareyou August 26th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Aw ofcourse I did, it is so well written, I'm sure others saw it too and many more will see it also in the upcoming days hopefully. <3

I'm glad so glad things are better for you at this time, and yay so good to see you back. *hugs back*

*noms and shares cookies*

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User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 25th, 2022

तब बचपन याद आता है


Poem by Ashutosh Rana


जब हम रो नही पाते

सुख से सो नही पाते

जब हम खो नही पाते

तब बचपन याद आता है


जब चिंता सताती है

हमारे तन को खाती है

जब भी मन नही मिलता

तब बचपन याद आता है


जब हम टूट जाते है

जब अपने रू जाते है

जब सपने सताते है

तब बचपन याद आता है


बच्चे हम रह नही पाते

बड़े हम हो नही पाते

खड़े भी रह नही पाते

तब बचपन याद आता है


किसी को सह नही पाते

अकेले रह नही पाते

किसी को कह नही पाते

तब बचपन याद आता है

Hello everyone 💜

This is navy

Today I have a poem in Hindi. I know many of people won't be able to understand the poem

But I'll bring English version of it soon 💜💜

Tagging a few people I know they may understand this poem

@elwinthisside124

@kindHuman1425

@softSummer2005

@theriverissinging

@Izzzzzzyyyyyy

@Starlasky (ik you're on break but still if you find it out after your break:') )

@Victor04 ( I miss you a lot)


User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 25th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Also tagging afew People more

@yourbuddy30

@ferventflame

@tidyHickory3283


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tidyHickory3283 August 25th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

I am touched :")

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navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022

@tidyHickory3283

Aww tody tidy 💜💜💜

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User Profile: yourbuddy30
yourbuddy30 August 25th, 2022

@navyHouse3677 I totally agree with your poem. Every minute of our life we do think about our childhood and it is one of the best phases of life


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navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022

@yourbuddy30

Yeah totally agreed and also whenever we are in trouble and there's no way we could see then also there's one thing remember how mindlessly we say all problems to everyone in our childhood 💜

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User Profile: theriverissinging
theriverissinging August 26th, 2022

@navyHouse3677 thank you for sharing, navy ❤️ a lot of us do feel what the poem tends to convey!

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navyHouse3677 OP August 27th, 2022

@theriverissinging

Thank you for reading my poem 💜💜

River 💜💜

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navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Tagging one more person

@Roisin0

User Profile: Roisin0
Roisin0 August 27th, 2022

@navyHouse3677 This...is amazing. I think the youth of today would certainly relate to this piece, for every word carries meaning in a way that not only conveys what it seeks to express but in sooth manages to touch one's heart. Thank you for delighting me with this! I usually don't check my notifications, but I'm glad I did today!

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User Profile: sparklycomet
sparklycomet August 25th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

woow navy this is amazing💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛

you just described something and everything I'm scared of right now😭

(you are so talented💛 )

User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022

@sparklycomet

Sparky 💜💜

Thanks for reading my poem

(You're so talented as weellllll)

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User Profile: juliak1968
juliak1968 August 25th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Here is a poem I wrote about my mental health :-)

Blessings, Day


PERCEIVING

Perceiving what we believe in

is deceiving and has no meaning

as life's mistreating

dishes out this beating

........Leaving us bleeding

But we cant see it if we close our minds

....and we cant think about this when we're blind

so walk away and you will find,

a friend here waiting for a sign!

So take your time

.....and organize

whats on your mind

and you'll wisely find

you're not really behind

so relax your eyes and you'll realize

you're fine just the way you are!

And you can reach for the stars

put cream on the scars

and then healing transpires

The delusional parts only confuse our goals

...and they corrupt our souls

Leaving us with a heart full of holes.

Set goals now and your mind will see

what closed eyes have failed to believe

Don't let sight deceive & keep us on our knees

....throwing logic into the breeze.

Winds at your back excited

Winds of hope reignited me.

Step by step confide

so we can share secrets of life

........Thinking

"what could be?"

.......But only if we let it,

if you hold back you'll regret it!

"There, Now I've gone and said it!"

We hold ourselves down......

Dirty on the ground.....

I've found myself tormented and bound

by invisibility. ......

I've ignored all possibility.....

so I must set myself free

of a self-inflicted confined mystery

....That causes so much mind-bending misery

User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022

@juliak1968

Wooow it actually touched me so badly that i feel crying now 😭

You are so talented thanks you for sharing it on my forum, I really appreciate it 💜💜💜

User Profile: juliak1968
juliak1968 August 26th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Hi,

Thank you for the nice compliment!~

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User Profile: sparklycomet
sparklycomet August 25th, 2022

This is a poem I wrote 2 years ago:

You feel that burn

coming out of your throat

when tears ooze out from your eyes

for the swords getting out from their mouths


Pain hurts

It sucks

Mocks are rocks

for a broken glass


Yet remember that moment

you feared the grave

it was black, blank

with ones you loved for a day


They cuddled my soul

with warm hands

around my hopeless hopes

for their love is a dorm

that never had a space for my folks



In here they refers to my family.

The moment I feared grave refers to an incident where it was said that the builidng I was in was having a time bomb, well luckily there wasn't.

User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022

@sparklycomet

Sparky 💜💜💜💜

Actually heart touched poem of yours

(Talented sis 💜💜💜💜)

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User Profile: littleMoon1313
littleMoon1313 August 25th, 2022

Immortality by Clare Harner, 1934


Do not stand

By my grave, and weep

I am not there,

I do not sleep—

I am the thousand winds that blow

I am the diamond glints in snow

I am the sunlight on ripened grain,

I am the gentle, autumn rain.

As you awake with morning’s hush,

I am the swift, up-flinging rush

Of quiet birds in circling flight,

I am the day transcending night.

Do not stand

By my grave, and cry—

I am not there,

I did not die.


This poem was written shortly after the sudden death of Harner’s brother. Using art to process grief is so beautiful to me. When I’m having a hard time with someone’s passing, I always turn to this poem for some comfort.

User Profile: juliak1968
juliak1968 August 25th, 2022

@littleMoon1313

Very nice poem!!!~

User Profile: sparklycomet
sparklycomet August 26th, 2022

@littleMoon1313

hey, this peom is really amazing💛💛💛

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User Profile: practicalStrawberries2858
practicalStrawberries2858 August 25th, 2022

Middlemist camellia

When all is lost

When my tears flow down my face

When I begin to hurt myself

When I begin to starve

When I can’t take much more.

I think of her

The Middlemist camellia

I smell her beautiful scent

Imagine her beautiful smile

I put the sharp edge down

Wipe my face of tears

Smile at my reflection

When all is lost

I think of her

The Middlemist camellia flower

The only one in the world

User Profile: calmsoulmeet
calmsoulmeet August 26th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Hi navy . Loved your poem. I also have a knack for writing poems . May I share the link to my poem ? .

Regards,

Meet.

User Profile: navyHouse3677
navyHouse3677 OP August 26th, 2022


@calmsoulmeet

Sureee you're free to share your poems links as well 🙂

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calmsoulmeet August 26th, 2022

@navyHouse3677

Please find link as under ::::

https://www.7cups.com/forum/HobbyZone_125/Poetry_268/Apoemon7Cups_284010/

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navyHouse3677 OP August 27th, 2022

@calmsoulmeet

What a wonderful poem you have written 💜💜💜

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User Profile: Izzzzzzyyyyyy
Izzzzzzyyyyyy August 26th, 2022

Ahh it's been soo long since we last talked!!

How are you doing?

It's an amazing poem navy and I hope those positive thoughts don't leave your side.

Good luck @navyhouse3677

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navyHouse3677 OP August 28th, 2022

@Izzzzzzyyyyyy

Izzzzyyyyy💜💜💜

How's adultie side 💜💜?

I hope everything is good and navy is ok just kinda having headache lol

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User Profile: scottnchills
scottnchills August 26th, 2022

A couple of poems I wrote for my wife a few years ago and posted to a FB group called "14 Words For Love".

The beauty of your heart, so fine
it softens the hardened corners of mine

One simple pill
encapsulating your laughter
would give medical researchers
exactly what they're after