For @Kristynsmama & @Tinywhisper11
A Mother's Love & Grief
In a garden of love, a mother's heart blooms,
Her gaze, a sunbeam that tenderly looms.
With arms like branches, a cradle of grace,
She nurtures the bud in a warm embrace.
Mother: "My darling, a lullaby in the night,
Whispers of love, a comforting light.
In your laughter, the stars find their song,
A melody sweet, where you belong."
Child: "Mama, your love, a soft, gentle stream,
Carries me through, like a cherished dream.
In your eyes, reflections of skies so blue,
A world of wonder, forever anew."
But in shadows cast by life's cruel design,
A tempest may come, stealing the sunshine.
Mother: "Oh, my heart, in sorrow it weeps,
A torrent of tears, in silence it seeps.
A tempest has taken you, my sweet dove,
Leaving behind a void, a blackened cove."
Child: "Mama, though gone, I'm a part of the breeze,
Caressing your cheek, rustling through trees.
In memories held, find solace and peace,
In the love we shared, let your grief cease."
Mother: "Yet, in the night, I yearn for your face,
Longing to hold you, in a warm embrace.
Grief, a storm that rages, relentless and wild,
A mother's love, forever and aching, my child."
Child: "Mama, like stars, I'll eternally gleam,
In the canvas of dreams, like a radiant beam.
Hold onto love, let it heal and mend,
For even in death, love has no end."
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I love this! Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!
@Kristynsmama
I am glad you liked it I just couldn't get ur post out of my head so I wrote what I felt 🤍
@tranquilechoes
this is so beautifully written and so touching.🥺
@LoveMyMoonflowers
thank you so much 🤍
@tranquilechoes
you really have a way with words 💜 i hope you’ll keep writing ^-^ 💙
@LoveMyMoonflowers
its almost like breathing for me I just can't continue without writing whenever I feel something deeply I can't help but put it down in words and thank you so much once again 🤍
@tranquilechoes
i’m glad you’ve found writing to be a good way to express yourself 💜 you write well ^-^
@tranquilechoes
sending hugs your way, if okie 💕
@LoveMyMoonflowers
you are very sweet and hug for you to in return 🥺🤍
@tranquilechoes
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@tranquilechoes You are a brilliant poet and have a beautiful way with words. What an absolutely beautifully written poem for 2 beautiful, strong mothers. ♡ This is just.... well, wow, is all I can say. Wow!
@tranquilechoes crying 😢 but happy thankful tears 😢 ❤ your the sweetest most talented person ever ❤❤ this poem means so much to me. Thankyou thankyou thankyou ❤❤ that was the sweetest gift I could ask for ❤❤❤ you really understand how a mother feels about the loss of their precious child😢 thankyou ❤ hugs you tightly ❤
@tranquilechoes
Omigoooshhh! Beautiful is an understatement for this one. Straight from your heart to the reader's. Thank you for using your gift of expression to reward us hoomans with the opportunity to *feel*. 🤍🤍🤍
@tranquilechoes
𝒜𝒷𝓈𝑜𝓁𝓊𝓉𝑒𝓁𝓎, 𝒽𝑒𝓇𝑒'𝓈 𝒶 𝒸𝒽𝒶𝓇𝓂𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓇𝑒𝓅𝓁𝓎: ✨ 𝒪𝒽, 𝓂𝓎 𝒹𝑒𝒶𝓇, 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝒹𝓈 𝓌𝑒𝒶𝓋𝑒 𝒶 𝓉𝒶𝓅𝑒𝓈𝓉𝓇𝓎 𝑜𝒻 𝑒𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃𝓈 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓉𝑜𝓊𝒸𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝑜𝓊𝓁. 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓅𝑜𝑒𝓉𝒾𝒸 𝑒𝓍𝒸𝒽𝒶𝓃𝑔𝑒 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓌𝑒𝑒𝓃 𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓇 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒸𝒽𝒾𝓁𝒹 𝒾𝓈 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝒶 𝑔𝑒𝓃𝓉𝓁𝑒 𝓈𝓎𝓂𝓅𝒽𝑜𝓃𝓎, 𝑒𝒸𝒽𝑜𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝑒𝓉𝑒𝓇𝓃𝒶𝓁 𝓂𝑒𝓁𝑜𝒹𝓎 𝑜𝒻 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒. ℰ𝒶𝒸𝒽 𝓈𝓉𝒶𝓃𝓏𝒶 𝒾𝓈 𝒶 𝒷𝓇𝓊𝓈𝒽𝓈𝓉𝓇𝑜𝓀𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓊𝓉𝓎, 𝓅𝒶𝒾𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒶 𝓅𝑜𝓇𝓉𝓇𝒶𝒾𝓉 𝑜𝒻 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝑒𝓃𝒹𝓊𝓇𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒷𝑜𝓃𝒹 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓌𝑒𝑒𝓃 𝒶 𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓇 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒽𝑒𝓇 𝓅𝓇𝑒𝒸𝒾𝑜𝓊𝓈 𝒸𝒽𝒾𝓁𝒹. 🌺
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𝒯𝒽𝑒 𝒾𝓂𝒶𝑔𝑒𝓇𝓎 𝒾𝓈 𝓈𝑜 𝓋𝒾𝓋𝒾𝒹 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝑒𝓃𝒸𝒽𝒶𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓃𝑔, 𝓉𝓇𝒶𝓃𝓈𝓅𝑜𝓇𝓉𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓂𝑒 𝓉𝑜 𝒶 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝓁𝒹 𝑜𝒻 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓁𝑜𝓃𝑔𝒾𝓃𝑔. ℱ𝓇𝑜𝓂 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒷𝓁𝑜𝑜𝓂𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝑔𝒶𝓇𝒹𝑒𝓃 𝑜𝒻 𝒶 𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓇'𝓈 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉 𝓉𝑜 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝓉𝑜𝓇𝓂𝓎 𝓉𝑒𝓂𝓅𝑒𝓈𝓉 𝑜𝒻 𝑔𝓇𝒾𝑒𝒻, 𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓇𝓎 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝒹 𝒾𝓈 𝒾𝓃𝒻𝓊𝓈𝑒𝒹 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝓇𝒶𝓌 𝑒𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓅𝓊𝓁𝓁𝓈 𝒶𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉𝓈𝓉𝓇𝒾𝓃𝑔𝓈.
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𝒯𝒽𝑒 𝒹𝒾𝒶𝓁𝑜𝑔𝓊𝑒 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓌𝑒𝑒𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓇 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒸𝒽𝒾𝓁𝒹 𝒾𝓈 𝒷𝑜𝓉𝒽 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉𝓌𝒶𝓇𝓂𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔, 𝓈𝒽𝑜𝓌𝒸𝒶𝓈𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒹𝑒𝓅𝓉𝒽 𝑜𝒻 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝒸𝑜𝓃𝓃𝑒𝒸𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃 𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓃 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒻𝒶𝒸𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝓁𝑜𝓈𝓈. ℐ𝓉'𝓈 𝒶 𝓅𝑜𝒾𝑔𝓃𝒶𝓃𝓉 𝓇𝑒𝓂𝒾𝓃𝒹𝑒𝓇 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝓉𝓇𝒶𝓃𝓈𝒸𝑒𝓃𝒹𝓈 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝒷𝑜𝓊𝓃𝒹𝒶𝓇𝒾𝑒𝓈, 𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓃 𝒹𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒽 𝒾𝓉𝓈𝑒𝓁𝒻.
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𝒴𝑒𝓉, 𝒶𝓂𝒾𝒹𝓈𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝒶𝒹𝓃𝑒𝓈𝓈, 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓇𝑒'𝓈 𝒶 𝑔𝓁𝒾𝓂𝓂𝑒𝓇 𝑜𝒻 𝒽𝑜𝓅𝑒 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓇𝑒𝓈𝒾𝓁𝒾𝑒𝓃𝒸𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓃𝑒𝓈 𝓉𝒽𝓇𝑜𝓊𝑔𝒽. 𝒴𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝒹𝓈 𝓇𝑒𝓂𝒾𝓃𝒹 𝓊𝓈 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝒾𝓈 𝑒𝓉𝑒𝓇𝓃𝒶𝓁, 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝓉𝒶𝓇𝓈 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓉𝓌𝒾𝓃𝓀𝓁𝑒 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓃𝒾𝑔𝒽𝓉 𝓈𝓀𝓎, 𝓁𝒾𝑔𝒽𝓉𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓌𝒶𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝓇𝑜𝓊𝑔𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒹𝒶𝓇𝓀𝓃𝑒𝓈𝓈.
📜 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓅𝑜𝑒𝓂 𝒾𝓈 𝓉𝓇𝓊𝓁𝓎 𝒶 𝓂𝒶𝓈𝓉𝑒𝓇𝓅𝒾𝑒𝒸𝑒, 𝒸𝒶𝓅𝓉𝓊𝓇𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝑒𝓈𝓈𝑒𝓃𝒸𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝒶 𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓇'𝓈 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓅𝒶𝒾𝓃 𝑜𝒻 𝑔𝓇𝒾𝑒𝒻 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝓈𝓊𝒸𝒽 𝑔𝓇𝒶𝒸𝑒 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓊𝓉𝓎. ℐ𝓉'𝓈 𝒶 𝓉𝒾𝓂𝑒𝓁𝑒𝓈𝓈 𝓉𝓇𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝑒 𝓉𝑜 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓅𝑜𝓌𝑒𝓇 𝑜𝒻 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒, 𝒶𝓃𝒹 ℐ 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒽𝑜𝓃𝑜𝓇𝑒𝒹 𝓉𝑜 𝒽𝒶𝓋𝑒 𝑒𝓍𝓅𝑒𝓇𝒾𝑒𝓃𝒸𝑒𝒹 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓂𝒶𝑔𝒾𝒸 𝓉𝒽𝓇𝑜𝓊𝑔𝒽 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝒹𝓈.🏵️☀️✨
@BelovedMe you're replay to my post 🏣📯 was a bit too much I hate you for being too sweet 🎂🎂🎂 on this platform !that I wish you could and I could message eachother :-)you are really a charming angel of this platform ❣️
@BelovedMe
You really didn't have to do this uk ur appreciation meant alot and is more than enough but thank you so much for not just reading but also understanding the emotions so well 🤍✨
@tranquilechoes As you wish Socrate I will 💫 Do it less often 🕯️But believe me it was not even 1% close to what you wrote :-)
what I said about you till now is just like some drops of snow🌧️
But you are a whole cloud of snow ❄️ 🌨️🔥
@BelovedMe
Sh.it why do you have to turn me to a tomato then I can't even talk to you 😭🤧🤍✨
@tranquilechoes you can as I heard someone saying- 😄 A wish of angel 😇 Always became reality !just wish miracle happens 💞
@BelovedMe that's nice then 🙃 as if you are human...then you are just like me ✴️ and being like me is charming and being like you is sweet 💞
@tranquilechoes
This is so good buddy. Thx for sharing it with us. 💙❤️