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6) Ensuring Best Writing Practices (OUTDATED)

User Profile: SoulfullyAButterfly
SoulfullyAButterfly January 31st, 2021

After understanding the general requirements to keep in mind whilst submitting your content articles for 7 Cups publication, this discussion highlights some general writing tips to keep in mind when writing content that relates to mental health.

Things to Do:

  • Make sure the article is empathetic, kind, helpful & informative (it fulfills the reader who found it), empowering. Replace mental “illness” or “disease” with “condition” or “issue” and soften any other mental health stigma language that might pop up. This helps ensure that your tone is supportive.

  • Think of story ideas that will be sharable in social media

  • Be concise

  • Be conversational and accessible in your writing

  • Back up statements with research or facts if applicable (cite sources) - try to confirm facts by ensuring at least 2 different sources mentioning them.

  • Include expert quotes and insights -- you can reach out to a psychologist or expert about your story and offer a quote and link to their practice for the collaboration. Make sure their title/expertise is attributed in the article

  • Be thorough, don’t gloss over specifics

  • Give the reader empathy and hope

  • Put yourself in the reader’s shoes: ask yourself what they need out of reading your piece and then deliver that

  • Try to combine personal experiences with expert insight to strengthen your piece.

  • Consider including friends and family members of people impacted by your topic in your audience.

For more tips on reporting mental health conditions and choosing words carefully, read the American Psychiatric Association’s article here

Other Tips:

The following are general guidelines to help find facts, help link things with 7 Cups as well as outreaching tips for personal stories and expert insight:

  • Always try to hyperlink some of your main sources.

  • Use authentic reporting websites such as the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), World Health Organization, or American Psychological Association, etc. for facts and up-to-date statistics. (Can be hyperlinked as mentioned above)

  • Use Google Scholar to search for relevant research work. Abstracts usually summarize research findings.

  • When outlining your article, consider asking yourself which information and what type of information can be added as a priority. For example, an article about mental health during the pandemic would likely report authentic global statistics and could use published research information.

  • When reviewing other resources that cover your topic or something close to it, always ask yourself what can help enhance that available content. How can you ensure you are providing a unique take on the topic? Consider thinking about what is missing that could be worth mentioning.

  • 7 Cups has lots of free services, including available self-help guides, subcommunities with forums, and other areas - generally, editorial assistants at 7 Cups help backlink to these resources, but you are welcome to directly mention them if it applies, for instance, mentioning how Sharing Circles can help users cope with loneliness or the lack of support in their daily lives.

  • Outreaching for both personal or expert quotes can be done via social media, contact forms of blog posts, or even email considering which information is available. You are welcome to PM @SoulfullyAButterfly if you think a 7 Cups Expert can help provide you the quote or required insight.

  • When outreaching for personal stories, introduce yourself and 7 Cups and explain your article topic briefly, and why you think their personal experience could help. Share how you can back-link (link back) to the person’s blog or other resources if they would like that in return for sharing their quote. Ensure that you ask them if they would like their name to be disclosed, or if they would like a pseudonym. Finally, let them know you will share the final published version so they can also share it with their acquaintances.

  • When requiring an expert quote, use the same procedure discussed, but consider asking for the expert’s availability. Mention how the expert’s work can aid your write-up and any questions you have. Ask for the expert’s professional practice page link and if they are interested, mention how they can have a published expert profile at 7 Cups (you can CC ayesha@7cups.com if needed).

Things To Avoid:

  • The overuse of cliches or corny language

  • Making it overly formal or using references most wouldn’t understand

  • Using extraneous words/phrases. For example, you don’t have to write, “it’s important to…” If you’re writing it, the reader will assume it’s important. Unless, of course, it really is a surprise that this piece of advice is important - in which case say that

  • Forgetting to explain the “why”

  • Repeating the same word or phrase often (unless intentional, i.e. in an article about a mantra you might repeat the mantra several times)

  • Overusing exclamation points

Activity

Using the information you just learned, write a paragraph (minimum of 100 words) for the article topic “Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic” - as this is only a paragraph and NOT the complete article, state a brief heading which will inform the reader whether your paragraph is about a general introduction or something more specific. Ensure your paragraph contains facts. Please note that you are to mention your sources too, as well as a link to at least one source within the paragraph.

Bonus: Consider using previous discussions to research and use keywords.

Additionally, reply to at least one other student and highlight the strengths of their work as well as areas for improvement.

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User Profile: brightDayFairy
brightDayFairy March 10th, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

6) Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic


Heading: Impact of Loneliness During COVID-19 and How You Can Overcome It


COVID-19 has presented us with new challenges, especially when considering the aspect of loneliness and its negative impact on our well-being. It is now more important than ever to find solutions to address this issue. The following steps are intended to motivate you and help you deal with it in a healthy way:


  • Humor: Watch funny shows or movies to lighten your mood; a good laugh with friends over a video call can also make a big difference in how you feel.
  • Exercise: Regular physical activity, whether it's a home workout, yoga, or a walk in nature, can significantly improve your mental health and reduce feelings of loneliness.
  • Sharing Feelings: What can help against loneliness? Expressing it and counteracting it. On 7 Cups, you have the opportunity to share your feelings with an active listener.
  • Seeking Help: Lastly, please seek help if you feel like you can't deal with loneliness on your own. You might consider contacting us at 7 Cups, where we offer group chats, chats with trained listeners, as well as therapists who can assist you with the situation.


Source: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8138818/

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User Profile: theConfidentialListener
theConfidentialListener March 16th, 2024

@brightDayFairy

I really loved the motivating side of this piece along with the tips :) great one!

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User Profile: theConfidentialListener
theConfidentialListener March 16th, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

"Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic"


Feeling Disconnected? You're Not Alone


Social distancing measures put in place during the COVID-19 pandemic have been essential for curbing the spread of the virus, but they've also had a significant impact on mental health. Loneliness, a common human condition characterized by feelings of isolation and a lack of social connection, has increased dramatically during this time. A study by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) found that over 3 in 10 adults in the United States reported experiencing symptoms of anxiety or depression during the pandemic, with loneliness being a contributing factor [1]. While feeling lonely can be a discouraging experience, it's important to remember that you're not alone in this. Many people are struggling with similar feelings, and there are steps you can take to build connection and combat loneliness during this challenging time.


Source:

[1] Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. (2020, August 26). Percentage of Adults Who Reported Experiencing Symptoms of Anxiety or Depression During the COVID-19 Pandemic. https://stacks.cdc.gov/view/cdc/85738

User Profile: sky2Ocean20
sky2Ocean20 March 19th, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic

Loneliness in Lockdown: how do we cope!

Covid-19 pandemic has very unexpectedly changed all of our lives. From gathering with friends, family, and colleagues in real life, our “real life” shifted to a virtual one. Physical isolation became a necessity and we seem to have slowly lost our connectedness. According to this article, the World Health Organization (WHO) stated that mental health issues are rising with the pandemic. We have to address this issue and take care of our mental well-being in such a crucial situation. To cope with loneliness during this COVID era we should implement various self-care routines, mindfulness, and relaxation techniques. It’s undeniable that we all need to seek support from time to time. But we don't know where to turn. I am here to tell you that 7cups.com is a platform where emotional support is offered by trained active volunteer listeners. Now you can reach out when you think about venting or need to talk.

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User Profile: lamimoon
lamimoon March 31st, 2024

@sky2Ocean20

STRENGHTS: You were empathetic, gave reader hope and you made it very concise and sharable in social media. 

IMPROVEMENTS: I would suggest to consider friends and family members of people impacted and consider including personal experiences and expert quotes.

I love your paragraph!

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User Profile: InsightfulPhoenix
InsightfulPhoenix March 25th, 2024

Here is the spin I took on this project, I hope you all enjoy!

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User Profile: FeureVox
FeureVox March 26th, 2024

@InsightfulPhoenix

Hello, it's @FeureVox again; I've evaluated the social media graphic related to coping with loneliness during the COVID-19 pandemic. Here are some strengths and suggestions for improvement:

Strengths:

1. Like always, your message starts on a strong and empathetic note, acknowledging the difficulty of isolation, which can resonate well with the audience.

2. The actionable tips, such as staying connected with family and maintaining a support circle, provide practical value to your reader.

3. Vibrant colors and imagery are essential for capturing attention and engaging users on social media platforms.

4. Acknowledging pets as a source of comfort includes the various ways individuals find support and companionship.

Humble suggestions for Improvement:

1. The text over the busy background is difficult to read, especially with the varied font sizes and colors. Simplifying the background or using a text-shadow could enhance readability.

2. The graphic is quite text-heavy for a social media image, which might overwhelm viewers. Consider using less text or spreading the content across multiple posts.

3. There's a small typo in the word "in" repeated ("in in quarantine"). Proofreading is crucial to maintaining professionalism and credibility.

4. The URL is not clickable in an image format; it may be more user-friendly to direct viewers to a link in the post's caption or bio instead.

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User Profile: InsightfulPhoenix
InsightfulPhoenix March 26th, 2024

Thank you for this wonderful feedback, I will continue to keep what you are speaking of in mind for future works. Once again such an amazing tone while displaying feedback, thank you again!


@feurevox

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User Profile: Magicpawsoffuture
Magicpawsoffuture June 9th, 2024

@InsightfulPhoenix

you really have way with getting point across with  words.

 It seems like a  social. Media post than. Article. Maybe the background is messing with me

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User Profile: FeureVox
FeureVox March 26th, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

Given the write-ups from the previous posts and following the detailed instructions for writing a paragraph on the topic "Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic," the following is a paragraph incorporating the keyword insights and best writing practices.

Enhancing Connectivity: Overcoming Loneliness in the Pandemic

The COVID-19 pandemic has significantly increased loneliness and isolation globally.

Research by the World Health Organization (WHO) shows a sharp rise in reported feelings of loneliness and isolation since early 2020.

Experts recommend regular virtual meet-ups, online activities, and support from platforms like 7 Cups to alleviate loneliness.

Prioritizing mental health and community support can effectively mitigate these feelings.

Individuals can connect and receive empathy through proactive engagement and digital platforms, showcasing human resilience in facing challenges.

Source:


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I'm excited to hear everyone's feedback.

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User Profile: InsightfulPhoenix
InsightfulPhoenix March 26th, 2024

Here is my thoughts😊

You have an incredible amount of knowledge of what is being asked in regarding this exercise. You do have a way with words so it is engaging and rather passionate. Your read comes off resourceful

Now for e.a.t being used:

E: You held great verbiage and also induced interest in the audience.

A: You did hold a sense of authority in what you were speaking. You also held focus in mention some facts with a source that is eligible.

T: You gained a respectable amount of trust with the wonderous amount of veribage and tone used.


The adjustments:

When it comes to information and being direct you have that strength to the tee. However, your audience would automatically take note minor empathy. The information is outstanding but there should be some deeper points on how the pandemic could boost creativity within a person, new hobbies and digging deeper into support of those around them. Otherwise amazing job!

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User Profile: FeureVox
FeureVox March 27th, 2024

@InsightfulPhoenix Thank you very much for your valuable feedback. I will look into this in my next posts.

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User Profile: Mellietronx
Mellietronx August 10th, 2024

@FeureVox

The paragraph does a great job of getting to the point and starting with a clear heading that makes it easy to know what it's about. It offers helpful tips, like joining virtual meet-ups and using platforms like 7 Cups, which is efficient advice for anyone feeling lonely during the pandemic. Mentioning the World Health Organization (WHO) also adds some good authority to the discussion. A few tweaks could make it even better—like adding a hyperlink to the WHO mention so readers can easily check it out, and maybe throwing in a specific stat to give more context on how much loneliness has increased. Also, connecting the problem of loneliness with the solution of digital engagement could flow a bit more smoothly. But overall, it’s a solid paragraph that just needs a few small adjustments to shine.

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User Profile: FeureVox
FeureVox August 24th, 2024

@Mellietronx Hey there! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I agree with your points about the paragraph. Adding a hyperlink to the WHO mention, and a specific stat could enhance the overall piece.

It's great to see that you're thinking about how to improve the content.

Keep up the excellent work!

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User Profile: Chocolate0
Chocolate0 August 24th, 2024

@FeureVox

You have formulated the topic in a simple and wonderful way, and supported your article with sources. I also liked the image you added.

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User Profile: FeureVox
FeureVox August 24th, 2024

@Chocolate0 I appreciate your kind words. I eagerly await further communication from you.

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User Profile: lamimoon
lamimoon March 31st, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

Importance of Addressing Loneliness During the COVID-19


Feeling lonely during the COVID-19 pandemic is prevalent across the world, since we are isolated from others and, most importantly, our friends. Research has shown that loneliness was widespread in Europe, America and China, around 10-40%, even before the COVID-19 (Leigh-Hunt, 2017; Xia and Li, 2018 cited in Hwang et al., 2020). There are proven chances of developing many health conditions if we don't manage loneliness and isolation, such as: a heart disease, stroke, depression, anxiety, addiction, dementia, earlier death and more (CDC, 2023). There is hope to fix this issue of the society today, so let's learn to help ourselves and those we love by learning how to cope with loneliness and isolation.



SOURCES:


- Leigh-Hunt, 2017; Xia and Li, 2018 cited in Hwang, T.-J., Rabheru, K., Peisah, C., Reichman, W. and Ikeda, M. (2020). Loneliness and Social Isolation during the COVID-19 Pandemic. International Psychogeriatrics, [online] 32(10), pp.1–15. doi:https://doi.org/10.1017/s1041610220000988.

- CDC (2023). Health risks of social isolation and loneliness. [online] Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Available at: https://www.cdc.gov/emotional-wellbeing/social-connectedness/loneliness.htm.

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User Profile: TogetherForeverAlways
TogetherForeverAlways April 5th, 2024

@lamimoon

Your paragraph contains a lot of relevant information. It is also short and concise.

As a suggestion, I’d say you can go a little deeper on the specifics.

User Profile: unassumingEyes
unassumingEyes June 14th, 2024

@lamimoon your paragraph is short, to the point, well written and provides relevant sources. A tip would be to mention how we can start learning to cope with the loneliness. 

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User Profile: TogetherForeverAlways
TogetherForeverAlways April 5th, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

The COVID pandemic brought significant worldwide challenges and consequences. One of those outcomes was increased global loneliness. Loneliness constitutes a risk for premature mortality and mental and physical health, so it’s very important to keep it closely monitored. Lockdowns, physical distance, and switch to remote work and school all strongly contributed to increase in loneliness across the globe. Such measures undoubtedly increased social isolation, though social isolation does not always lead to loneliness. As a matter of fact, social isolation means having a small social network and few interactions with others, while loneliness is the painful feeling of having less or poorer quality social connections than a person wants.

 

Source: https://www.apa.org/news/press/releases/2022/05/covid-19-increase-loneliness

User Profile: BloomingSakura
BloomingSakura May 1st, 2024

Using the information you just learned, write a paragraph (minimum of 100 words) for the article topic “Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic” - as this is only a paragraph and NOT the complete article, state a brief heading which will inform the reader whether your paragraph is about a general introduction or something more specific. Ensure your paragraph contains facts. Please note that you are to mention your sources too, as well as a link to at least one source within the paragraph.

Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic
Pandemic Isolation Causes an Increase in Loneliness

To prevent the spread of the COVID-19 Virus, countries worldwide have issued an order for everyone to stay at home. Students have to study from home and most working adults have switched to a Work From Home (WFH) arrangement. This change has caused a decline in face-to-face social interactions and caused an increase in loneliness. Killgore, Cloonen, Taylor, and Dailey (2020) did a research on 1,013 U.S adults by asking them to fill in the UCLA Loneliness Scale-3 and Public Health Questionnaire (PHQ-9) 3 weeks after most states issued the stay-at-home orders. They found a total of 43% respondents who scored above the published cutoffs which is also strongly associated with greater depression and suicidal ideation. Due to the effect of loneliness on our mental health, we need to equip ourselves with the knowledge of how to cope with loneliness. By learning how to cope with loneliness, we can prepare ourselves to stay physically and mentally safe during the pandemic.

If you ever need support or a guide on how to deal with loneliness, you can read the 7 Cups guide about How to Deal with Loneliness here and connect with our listeners on 7cups.com

Source:

1. Killgore, W. D. S., Cloonen, S. A., Taylor, E. C., & Dailey, N. S. (2020). Loneliness: A signature mental health concern in the era of COVID-19. Psychiatry Research, 290, 113117. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.psychres.2020.113117


User Profile: daydreammemories
daydreammemories May 9th, 2024

@SoulfullyAButterfly

Effects of pandemic over our mental health: loneliness arises

Covid pandemic had a significant effect over our mental as well as physical health. According to research, feeling of loneliness deeply arose during covid and has been here even after the pandemic waves. Young adults, people with a limiting health condition, single or widowed people specially got affected through the lockdowns. Connecting with friends, exploring options and different hobbies at home, harnessing the power of internet, being creative, and avoiding all or nothing thinking would be super beneficial in that matter. 

https://www.manulife.ca/personal/plan-and-learn/healthy-living/wellbeing/solitude-and-isolation-during-pandemic.html

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User Profile: BloomingSakura
BloomingSakura May 12th, 2024

Hi there! I love how your submission for the activity includes research as a reliable source. It also includes various information that the reader would want to know from the article such as age demographics and potential solutions to cope with loneliness. One thing I can suggest is to provide resources from 7 Cups that fit the article's theme or topic!

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User Profile: Magicpawsoffuture
Magicpawsoffuture May 17th, 2024

Coping with Loneliness During the COVID-19 Pandemic

 How to best handle anxiety and loneliness  while on lock down

 Being stuck in a house for long periods of time without seeing people you know during the covid times can be tough

for sure.The cases of loneliness went up during that time. You may wonder if there is anything you can do to

combat  loneliness during being stuck inside for long periods of time.  In the help guide from HSS Education Institute it teaches how to deal with anxiety and social isolation during the covid 19 pandemic  years.  I can also show how to recognize signs  of  loneliness and anxiety so you can be aware of it. In later paragraphs I would go in more details on how to cope with loneliness  and anxiety using example of the article .



https://www.hss.edu/files/coping-strategies-covid-19-scleroderma-20200413.pdf

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Magicpawsoffuture May 17th, 2024

@Heartsandrosesandpaws

@SirenOfSerenity

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Magicpawsoffuture June 5th, 2024
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User Profile: coolvibes
coolvibes June 5th, 2024

@Heartsandrosesandpaws Nice work paws, it is informative and empathetic. you were clear about your understanding of being locked indoors for a long period of time. Only issue to change is you repeated the same statement. your inclusion of your resource flowed nicely.

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coolvibes June 5th, 2024

@coolvibes just wanted to clarify that changing the wording of the resource statement would have gone along way. the validation or impact statement I think was too similar.

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Clarisse29 June 11th, 2024

@Heartsandrosesandpaws good job!

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