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Prompt of The Week: "If I knew this would happen, I would have talked to you sooner."

User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 April 16th, 2022

Hello, community!

I hope you have been well! Welcome back to the writing series- 'Writers Assemble!', where I present you with a couple of writing prompts to exercise your creative muscles every week! If you haven't checked out the previous post of the series, I've got you! You can find it here!

Without further ado, here is the prompt for today:

Begin a poem or short written piece with the sentence, "If I knew this would happen, I would have talked to you sooner."

What will you be doing? Good question! You'll be replying to my post with your original

  1. poems
  2. prose (long or short)

As of now, the word limit is a maximum of 500 words.

Happy writing! And do tag some friends if you think they might be interested in this activity! If you have any questions about the series or want to submit a prompt, then please feel free to message me: @Clarisse29!

If you're interested in being tagged every time a new post is made to the series, reply to this post with "I want to be tagged for more prompts". Thank you!

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User Profile: GoldenNest2727
GoldenNest2727 April 16th, 2022

@Clarisse29

This was a fantastic idea! Thank you for starting this initiative.

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User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@GoldenNest2727

aww thank you golden!

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User Profile: ouiCherie
ouiCherie April 16th, 2022

@Clarisse29

If I knew this would happen, I would have talked to you sooner. You called to talk about life and I thought we had forever. Oh boy, how wrong I was.


I pressed to accelerate, I needed to see you soonest. Speeded down the highway, I whispered to no one, if you must go, wait for me a little while longer.

I stepped into the place that gave me chills. Just in time for her to announced your departure. Despite my regrets, thank you for waiting a little while longer.

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User Profile: GoldenNest2727
GoldenNest2727 April 17th, 2022

@ouiCherie

Very unique, Cherie. I enjoyed reading it.


User Profile: CupoSad076
CupoSad076 April 18th, 2022

@ouiCherie

I love this

User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@ouiCherie

loved your perspective cherie!

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User Profile: amiablePeace77
amiablePeace77 April 16th, 2022

A letter to my Inner Child

I’m sorry for what you’ve been through

I’m sorry for not having been there for you when you cried out loud for help

It hurts me knowing you had to do it all on your own, no one at your side

I wish I would have heard your begging for help, seen your tears when you crawled up somewhere hiding from the world

I thank you for pushing through and for never giving up

There’s still a long way to go but now we go together

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User Profile: soulsings
soulsings April 16th, 2022

@amiablePeace77 beautiful poem very inspiring

User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@amiablePeace77

very well written!

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User Profile: enthusiasticTortoise6681
enthusiasticTortoise6681 April 17th, 2022

@Clarisse29 if I knew this would happen I would have talked to you sooner. I would have let you cuddle me that one night you tried, I would have told you just how much you meant to me, being my link to the rest of the family, being Strong enough to make me do the hard things, I would have apologized for when I yelled. I would have talked to you about being my mom, and my needing to grow up, but not through trauma. I would have talked to you sooner about humbling myself before your death. I could of said how sorry I was for every time I ever hurt your feelings. I would have told you what a beautiful and individual person you are. I would thank you for protecting me in such a horrific car accident. I would say I loved you as my mother, and walked with you s my friend.

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User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@enthusiasticTortoise6681

such a raw piece <3 thank you for sharing!

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User Profile: carefreeRose1118
carefreeRose1118 April 18th, 2022

If I knew this would have happened,

I would have talked to you sooner.

I would have replayed our conversations over and over,

Until they became a part of me.

Instead of a cutting through my wide open chest.

I would have said more I love you's,

I would have fought harder to repair the damage done.

I would have opened up faster,

Showing you the emotions I experienced.

Now,

All I can do is replay our last happy conversation,

Hearing your laughter,

And praying you knew how special you were to me,

How much I love you.

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User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@carefreeRose1118

very beautifully done! thank you for sharing!

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User Profile: ThoughtfulBlossom
ThoughtfulBlossom April 18th, 2022

@Clarisse29


The Distant Times


The time is ticking,

The world is spinning,

My mind is racing,

As I think about you.


All the times we spent,

Worrying about the current,

But we never thought,

To talk things through.


You're a world away,

In another time and space,

And If I knew this would happen,

I would have talked to you sooner.


It's all to late,

To worry right now,

But you'll be in my heart,

Where it's healing still.


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User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@ThoughtfulBlossom

such a nice piece! thank you for sharing!

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User Profile: ThoughtfulBlossom
ThoughtfulBlossom April 19th, 2022

@Clarisse29

I’m very glad that you like it, and thanks for reading! ❤️

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User Profile: CupoSad076
CupoSad076 April 18th, 2022

@Clarisse29

[cw, a poem to my best friend/lover, who is gone of his own will]

If I knew this would happen, I would have talked to you sooner.

I would have reminded you that I was there.

If I knew how close you were, I would have ran

I'd run to your doorstep, I'd break into your house

I'd take you far away

To a safe place, just the two of us.


"Please stop, please stay

Don't go away

I need you here

My love, my dear

I know it's hard

I know too well

But the next time we meet can't be in Hell-

Just let me hold you

Let yourself cry

Because I couldn't take it if you were to die

Just three more years, that's what we'd say

Three more years and we'd run away

Who would I tell all my secrets and stories?

Who would be my light?

We promised that we'd still be together

At the end of this long, bloody fight

So please stop, please wait

Don't take your fate

Please hold out this hate..."

But my words were too late.


If I knew you were going I would have tried to say goodbye

Because I'm only so much, I know

If I knew, if only I knew... I would have never let you go.

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User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 19th, 2022

@CupoSad076

this poem had my heart feeling waves of things, so so well done. thank you for sharing <3

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User Profile: CupoSad076
CupoSad076 April 19th, 2022

@Clarisse29

Thank you so much <3

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User Profile: adventurousSquare6860
adventurousSquare6860 April 21st, 2022

It is not the same.


I wish I would wake up and this all would be a game.


If I knew this would happen, I would have talked to you sooner.


I need you to know I’m trying my best.


I’m trying to get him and I out of this mess.


I don’t blame you, you need to know that too.


I blame the bottle and maybe one day he will be through.

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User Profile: Clarisse29
Clarisse29 OP April 21st, 2022

@adventurousSquare6860

such a heartfelt piece! thank you for sharing!

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User Profile: helloTortoise301
helloTortoise301 May 12th, 2022

If I knew this would happen

I would have talked to you sooner

But I didn't know who you were

Where you were and quite frankly thought you had disappeared.

Also I was told that you belong in another strata of society

And compared to you,I'm practically a beggar girl

Who would have thought the world would get so ravaged

It seems like a war with hate upon hate

Racism,sexism,and climate change

Families pulled apart in multiple ways

I'm not sure if anyone would have taken me seriously before

I was not sure anyone cares at all anymore

Whoever really cares would come to me I thought

Add to that the effects of this pandemic

The newspaper obituary column is full -day after day

An apocalypse of sorts,in many ways

What is this world we have tried to achieve

An eye for an eye -the whole world's blind